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AkumaKami64


Insane, Reality-Warping Chaos God? Warring and Reunniting Siisters of the Day and Night? Vague backstories? How was I suppose to resist? My Patreon!

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This sounds interesting and with a interesting little bent that I haven't seen but then again I'm not really into godhood stuff since all I can come up with right off the bat is that greek "stuff"! I have to intentionally think of god(s) that are at least reasonably worth while, greek is so much a "see a god, walk away and never look back"

God and Goddesses really shouldn't be capitalized, going off of real world conventions. 'God' has implications of (Judeo/ChristianIslamic) monotheism that aren't really appropriate here. But that's ultimately a stylistic choice on your part.

Eh, mane6 alicorn-only harem is best. They'll get there I'm sure :3

Question. What is Chrysalis in this world?

Yay! More please!

Enjoying this.
Twilight calling AJ "Jacqueline" I find a bit disconcerting, don't know why.
Perhaps it's a goddess thing?

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Jacqueline is often a girl name that is shortened to Jacie or Jack. This might be the author embellishing thing for effect.

7487204 I agree with you.
Given all her friends call her AJ/Applejack, perhaps Twi calling her Jacqueline is a desire for increased intimacy between them. AJ certainly does not seem to mind!

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True true. Either way this is a great setup. Don't you think so?

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Indeed.
Thus far avoiding the clichés these fics fall into. I'm adicted to Twi fics with this sort of premise so I'm always for something new and more nuanced.

We need more of this, I eagerly await.

7487204 then should she really be calling her AppleJacqueline?:rainbowderp:

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Her name in this fic is Jaqueline Apple, with Applejack as the nickname she normally goes by.

7529000 I've been trying to find stories like this for ages! finally i found one:pinkiehappy:, I can't wait for the next chapter.:yay:

I'd like to see more of this

This is a rather interesting concept. I don't think anyone's ever approached alicorn godhood like this. The interactions between the characters is really sweet and I can see a lot of interesting things done with this premise. You have my interest.

Even if not sexually, I hope Spike plays a substantial role in this story. One would think he'd also be on the list of worshipers.

will there be more of this?

Is there going to be anymore chapters? I only ask because this seemed like a interesting story.

I do hope that you return to this project soon it seems that it could be an exciting new take on alicorns are gods trope where you actually explore how that would effect their relationships and emotional attachments to one another. While writing some excellent Dom/Sub clop.

Fascinating concept. I would love to see what their friends say when they find out.

Comment posted by Zeprto678 deleted Feb 22nd, 2019

Will there be other pairings in this story that involve Twilight with other mares other than with Applejack? Also, her second follower should be Trixie.

Oh wow This updated?! Ok then. Ill be honest this was not expected but I am very happy to see this get some attention.

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I assumed this one was well dead and buried. Great to see it continued!

This was a fun chapter. Though with the end scene, you might want to add a porn tag. I think.

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Huh. I don't remember if the porn tag was there four years ago. What's the line between a fic needing the Porn tag as oppose to just the sex tag?

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I, don't know, actually. IS this a porn story or is it just going to have sex, but that's not the main focus? If the latter, you're good.

"You know the phrase, "That is between a creature and their God?" Well, it's a bit literal for us. No one notices anything strange going on between a Goddess and her worshipper, unless I allow it or they already worship someone like you do.

Well, that will be fun in the long run! :trollestia:

Nice chapter, good work.

Interesting to see this continue. I’m looking forward to finding out more of the odd mechanisms of the divine.

this is so awesome and i am so, SO happy to see it continue!!!!!!! just absolutely love the dynamic of worship your creating here, and of course i greatly enjoy the sexy parts especially!

as for the mystery soul, coudl be any number of lucky mares, but im gonna go a little out there and say, i think its zecora. i think zebras have never worshiped an equestrian goddess before, and twilight wants to make the first devotee her own, not just to make sure its as wonderful an experience as possible for a whole new people represented by he friend zecora, but also as a way to prove herself as a new goddess, by being first to approach an entire society and thus get the lion's share of its conversions. its an out there theory but i think it woudl be very interesting and fun if true!

edit: acutally coudl also be yona, or 1 of the lady hipogriffs or gryphons or dragons, by that same reasoning i guess

... Great to see this return. One of my favourite narratives on fimfic.
Think you have all trained us in the art of patience.
Indeed, life is messy, hope you continue to experience calmer waters. In the meantime I'm looking forward to more of this simple pleasure
Best:twilightsmile:

any chance we'll get another update soon?

I find myself here after random story-hopping, and man is this an exciting premise. I usually give a story ~2 years before I consider it DoA, so here's to hoping that you keep going.

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