Yay. Been waiting for this and it was worth the wait. I enjoyed the ever expanding of the language and the words in the native language and hiding the translation in English. Keep it up and enjoy both the sexual and other bits as well. Should be fun to see what you got plan with what seems to be discord coming in the next chapter.

WOO Updates!

your existence is mainly devoted to relieving her sexual tension

this is the opposite of a problem.

7909153 Would you still think so if you came from a world that ostracized people who thought that way and didn't know you liked it?

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I'm sure I'd convince myself that in my retelling of events, if I ever got home, she have been some humanoid alien with yellow skin and pink hair. What happens in the aliens basement can stay in the aliens basement.

My guess Discord had a claw in our arrival and hes jusg having fun seeing us dance to his friends will.

7912343 If only it were so simple.

Interesting. I'd like to see the dynamic between Fluttershy and Twilight once or after it's clear that Fluttershy has essentially sexually enslaved a sentient being.

I hope the human gets justice and Fluttershy is charged and prosecuted for what she's done.

7913971 Here's a hint: Applejack

7914740 Multiple endings have crossed my mind.

You've definitely captured my attention with this. Good writing! Good setup. Good story!

7917947 Oh, well thank you

Neat! I'm interested to see where this goes!

Are you developing Shihlka as an actual conlang?

7923650 No, just enough to tell the story.

That's gold!
I like the way you show the language barrier.
Having in mind that the human owes his unusual sexual stamina to some kind of drug, or magic - sex scenes are well written and immersive.
Fluttershy acts believably and (as terrible as it sounds) she seems to fit this this kind of story.
Can't wait for next chapter!
Please do not let this story became too dark.

7968489 I can promise you no unnecessary or excessive gore.

But who am I to qualify the meaning unnecessary or excessive?

Please don't let this fic be dead.

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It's not. I've just hit a bit of a block and am very busy with other projects.

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Well that's good to hear I hope things go well with those other projects.

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...*pokes the story with a stick*...

You sure? Looks pretty dead to me...

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One word: Tardigrade

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How does a microscopic "water bear" suffice as an answer here?

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What are tardigrades known for?

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Being able to survive allot. I'm just saying, you can't use a creature as an answer like that. Like, sure, it's a reply, but does it really answer the question? I get what your doing, referring to the story as a tardigrade to imply that it can survive allot, but that's just a Longshot reference.

.. Plus, an entire year without update... You ain't got much wiggle room in terms of saying you haven't been slacking in keeping up with the story.

Not trying to insult you or anything, just saying. Sorry if this is tl;dr

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A metaphor doesn't have to fall in perfect parallel with what it's describing, it just has to get the point across without using a blunt description. You understood what I was saying well enough, even though it seems you don't know the most relevant aspect of tardigrades here which is that they can come back from what appears to be a very definite state of death after extremely long spans of time and inhospitable conditions. Much like this story being capable of coming back from what appears to be death, even while the author is enduring inhospitable conditions, such as being accused of being a slacker during harsh times in their life, where doing things like writing about filling demure ponies with male ejaculation might fall to the wayside in favor of study or livelihood.

I revisit this site almost daily to remind me of what I haven't finished and to see some of the nice and eager comments from readers that help me keep writing other things. I'm also a very patient person and not upset with you, but I'd advise you to be a little more mindful of how you approach people who are doing things you like, without asking for anything in return.

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Oh believe me I know all too well that struggle as an author myself, and a fellow human being that life can be troubling forcing you to take your mind off of writing. It was never my intention to "accuse"you of being a slacker. Only stating that you were slacking on the story, which is true and an okay thing. And keeping yourself afloat (studies and a job and home) of course take priority over a story.

I apologize if I got a little personal with that last comment, it just really irks me when I see a story with good reception only to see that the stats point to it being dead.

Anyways, if you ever want to get back to the story, just from this conversation I'd be willing to offer to be a proof reader if you need one. (Not too brag but I proof for about 4 authors)

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Haha Saying I'm slacking is, in essence, accusing me of being a slacker, but I understand your intentions weren't hostile. We're good.

I'd have to see some of your work, but I might be willing to take you up on that editorial offer, so long as you aren't the type that attempts to correct sentences like "Its light faded." to "It's light went out slowly.". Frankly, I've wasted too much time with editors who should have picked up a copy of The Elements of Style, before offering their services. Not that the time and effort wasn't appreciated, of course.

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Mm. I never had that issue, I always proofed my own stuff. Normally i ask the author to put it in a Google doc, send the link via fimfiction, and I use the suggestion feature to show changes and let the author know what needed to or could have been changed, instead of just outright changing things. And I don't really change much unless it's grammatically incorrect, or doesn't flow right. Your example there is a form of style, but another person I proof for, his first language isn't English, so naturally a few things wouldn't sound right, if that serves as an adequate example/comparison. However, small thing, that ' in the second it's. I would fix things like that, continuity errors, (which I just comment on to point out and let you figure out how to fix cuz I don't change the story on people, I just fix grammar). (Also side note I do tend to use semicolons allot.) But overall, I try my best not to change what is said, but to fix what is incorrectly said.

"The dog leaped over the moon"
"The dog leapt over the moon"

"You could use the fish as a baseball bat"
"You could use the fish like a baseball bat"

As a few small examples of what I mean, tho they are piss poor cuz I can't think of bad grammar to save my life lol.

But yeah, you can send a chapter my way and I'll show you what I do.
Like a job, you do what you're told, not what you think you should be doing.
Sorry for the tl;Dr again.

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Conversations aren't exactly best held in a comment section lol

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Well, you sound like you know what you're talking about better than others I've worked with, so far. I might be sending you a Docs link sometime, if you'll be willing to proofread then.

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Agreed

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Wouldn't offer if I wasn't willing lol. Feel free to pm me when you do

this story will continue? or is R.I.P?
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I know it's hard to believe at this point, but there will be more. I'm working on other NSFW stuff for a friend's story that will be non-canon but tangent with his.

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there will be more.

Eagerly waiting.

Can we finally count the stories dead?

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No, I still really want to write more, I just haven't had the appropriate inspiration. I need a certain quality and content of Flutterfucking art, I think.

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yea... definitely dead.

I hope this story continues. It’s good clop, and I absolutely adore settings where ponies and humans have completely different languages.

This story is amazing. Sad it hasn't had an update in years...