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You may want to go over the chapter again, found a few words missing a letter or misspelled here and there, and when Luna is talking about Discord's first defeat she is supposed to say millennia ago not decades ago.
7955162 alright Ill give it a look over and try fixing it up thank you for telling me
7955448 yep, no problem.
7955448 and you have donovan in there instead of steel
And if you want for greenie when he says ass make it arse means the same but with irish accent
7955448 for now focus on this you have me intrigued
7956099 alright
I'm sorry but I lost all interest after I realized this is almost a direct rip off of a wolf among ponies.
7955162 alright I went through and fixed some stuff hope its alright now
7955448 alright thanks for the tips
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She was to far away so she couldn't have punched him in the shoulder also thats just corny, thank you for your advice though