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You need an editor
You need an editor
7529844 I agree.
I have a story similar to this, except it's pokemon and Lloyd is an asshole.
Can you call them the vortex gauntlet and stardust sword?
7612470 sure
7612684 k
This looks like a good story, but I just couldn't get past the broken English. I'm not voting either way. If the Author can get a proof reader to clean it up I would be happy to give it another chance.
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I agree with these two
I love the story dude! Sure your grammar could use more work, but it's still AWESOME!
7612684 need more chapters got into it
7612684 are you ever going to continue this story?
7931256 maybe havent really thought of a plot maybe but when i do its probably gonna be a long story
7931397 ok
This story seem a kind of like another story I've read, Wolf Among Ponies, at least that's what I think.
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Similar but different
Or
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May I use the edit one?
I noticed that "they" was spelt as "thay" and that no one decided to take that as an indirect reference so...
<The Daleks have no concept of elegance.>
with that similar image right?
https://i.pinimg.com/originals/da/77/6d/da776d234671166dbabcdfc610d01e1d.png