Roseluck is an Alicorn now, and she really wants Twilight's advice on the subject.
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I was expecting Twilight to point out all the Alicorn ponies walking around outside, showing Rose the glory of Alicorn OCs!
Alright me will read this now xP
7454924 I liked it :)
Huh. A little one shot from priest where things are not weird or 'M'...........I quite like this.
7454941
You're right. I think I'm getting sick.
7454945
So becoming an alicron doesn't make you a princess. It must be the other way around!!
Cute story. Surprisingly not freaky, seeing who the author is.... good job though.
All these people being so shocked you wrote something gentle...
Jeeze, who do they think you are, me?
So this whole time Twi never noticed her horn? And Rose never mentioned it.
I was beginning to wonder if Rose was confused and she had simply become a pegasus.
Awww... this was oddly sweet of Twilight, and brought a little smile to my face that made me forget about this horrible fudging day I'm going through...
Why thank you for the story Flutterpriest, thank you very much.
Keep it up.
That was cute
Of course now you made us expect a smut version. Get to it, please?
You forgot to mention the fact that Roseluck will live forever and will see her family and friends die. So, yeah, things WILL change.
7455887
Didn't someone from the staff say that any alicorn that is not the Princess Sisters will age normally?
7456086
Hasbro staff? Don't know...
7456086 IIRC Meghan McCarthy tweeted that Twilight would not outlive her friends
Whether or not that implies that Twilight's friends will eventually ascend or that she's still bound a normal lifespan....
Well, I haven't read your story yet, but I can see you've written a story where a random background pony character was used as an alicorn in this fic, and you've made it make sense, given it a great plot, and managed to get a 52-2 rating on it as of now.
Normally a fic like this would be the opposite way, so what frickin kind of writing God must you Have to be to have written such a masterpiece?
Good on ya, mate!!
7455221 Well, in Twilight's defense, she hadn't had her coffee yet.
Fun story! Cute story! I might make a nod to it someday.
This was a story.
This is a very good one-shot.
Perfect story to get my internet back to. Thanks, man!
This was such an unexpected route. I didn't think that this was going to have such a good lesson in it, but hey, it's nice be thrown a curve-ball now and again.
A very solid story and definitely worth the feature.
I see that Twilight has learned how to break the fourth wall now.
Also, lol at the pic at the end.
7455887
But she will always have flowers for their funerals and weddings, and really, who else but a gardener is more prepared to see crops fail every century or so?
7464026
Hmm...
You have a point...
The Good:
I enjoyed the overall story.
The bad:
4th #(*&$@(*@$$ wall breaking.
Aggghhhh...
I guess I'll give it a like.
I kind of miss when you wrote stories that weren't just one-shots or rehashes from 4chan. It's been a while since you've put out something longer than a thousand words that I could actually read.
*standing in the shattered wreckage of the 4th wall*
Well that was something.
We now need a chapter of Roseluck going around town telling everypony she's a princess, and with all the havoc that ensues.
4th wall braking... Who stole my shtick?
;)
Tiny typo:
for a while
...
Okay!