Basically stories of Celestia and Luna bickering like sisters. Or Celestia being a jerk. Or Luna being clueless. XD
Eye Pad. What is an Eye Pad? And what is it doing, sitting there, staring at me? Why does its face look so...blank? Where are its eyes? Tia says I have to turn it on. I press the button. It's face goes bright. And now I think I'm blind. Thanks...iPad. Yes that's what it is called.
Luna discovers the wonders and joys of sharing a room with an iPad. And the frustration.
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I had a similar reaction to that video as well. I don't see the appeal at all.
As for this story however, I thoroughly enjoyed it.
I think the only part I didn't like was Luna committing acts of technological cruelty. The poor iPad never had a chance. 
7432260 yeah, maybe I should add the gore tag.
7432319 Smile HD, the one that Luna watched, oh Luna, poor Luna.
7432462 I thought you were typing in another language for a second!
7432482 yet sadly, I cannot decipher a comment such as this. These letters are too jumbled for my liking. Tell me, what does this comment translate to?
7432320 Nice!
Not bad. I do have a question since I'm getting into writing myself. Isn't it suppose to be like this
"Cursed Eye Pad! Why don't you speak?" Luna demaded.
All of a sudden it's screen started flashing. Was it trying to intimidate her? She would never be so easily intimidated! The Eye Pad made a loud noise and vibrated. Luna was intimidated. Writing showed up on the screen.
"Insert line here" Said person.
Sorry if I got it mixed up. I am trying to get tips on writing so that's why. If I'm wrong, then my bad. Other then that, It's a nice story. Like
7433442 if another pony speaks then you have to do a new line, if the "Eye Pad" speaks then new line as well. Is that what you mean?
7433644 Yes. Was I wrong? If so, my bad. I'm new to this so that's why I asked
7433656 you can't have two ponies speaking in the same line. Example:
"Luna, you're supposed to play on it!" Celestia cried. "Is that how you do it," Luna said.
"Luna, you're supposed to play on it!" Celestia cried.
"Is that how you do it," Luna said.
The second one is correct. You're welcome if this helps.
7433689 Ah. Thanks.
. I should've have known. Well still, a nice story nevertheless.
It's hilarious
Funny. This is why I like Luna.
7503759 whoops....wow completely forgot that Luna read it....maybe she thought it was abbreviated in some sort of way...I dunno. *thinks* now where on earth did I break the fourth wall? Oh...the cake joke. *blinks* I actually don't know why I did that to be honest....oh wait the word count. The original story was a lot shorter than this and it was under a thousand words so I put in as many new words as I could. The Smile HD jokes wasn't originally going to be in there but once I remembered what happened when I discovered that part of the fandom.....you can guess the rest. I like this story better than the other two probably because of the fact that Luna smashed the iPad because of Smile HD. (You guys know I hate that video, right?)
This is why God invented the stylus. There's no way in Tartarus that I could use my phone's microscopic keyboard with the giant sausages that I have for fingers.
P.S. You couldn't pay me to watch a "Cupcakes" video.