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Chicago Ted


"Friendship" is a magical-class noun.

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Before the Princess of the Night forsook,
She watcht o'er ev'rypony's dream, and shook
Away the terrors that would plague us all.
But in the heads of all she ne'er did look.

But why? you ask, why does she make that call?
Am I not vital? Is my fright too small?
But nay, young foal, your fears are not the case,
For in some wicked dreams, she too may fall.

She'd realize this trap once: into a place
Fell Princess Luna, after one such grace
Of fright, in which e'en she'd just scarcely wade;
She soon was whiskt away without a trace.

By luck, in vex and silence she'd not staid;
Before returning home, this quest she made.


Coverart by flamevulture17. Preread by Shinzakura.

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Interesting. Not common to see a story told in poem form here. Not sure if your intention is to keep going with that, or if that was just for the prologue but either way I'm quite intrigued and interested in seeing just where Luna landed herself.

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Actually, I do intend to tell this entire story with that exact form -- iambic pentameter rubaiyat quatrains, with a perfectly unbroken chain rhyme.

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Well, now I'm really intrigued. Definitely gonna have to keep my eye on this.

Canticle, a hymn or song.

Interesting.

How satisfying are your word counts? Man, that must’ve taken effort :unsuresweetie: colour me impressed!

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