Well, I'm afraid I'm dropping it. I gave it another shot, but I don't see anything to this relationship. I'm not even sure if it's romantic or not. Yeah, sex stuff happens and sex is awesome, but I don't see an actual hook to this anymore. If it's just weird lesbian sex stuff, fine, but that's not what got me into this to begin with. What did is gone, I don't see any reason to stay. Sorry.

I'm somewhat supportive of 7338401 's point. The first story was more than just the sex between Sweetie and Fleur, and I hope that this story is more than just seeing what strange new thing we can put up Sweetie's pooper.

My one actual suggestion would be to make Sweetie more active in these sessions. Sure, she does "things," but the sex so far has all been things being done to her.

There seems to be a typo in the second sentence "Along they way they met up with..."