• Published 13th Jun 2016
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Slumbering worries - TwilightAppleDash



Applejack and Rainbow have a chat in bed.

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Slumbering worries

Lying comfortably on my back, it was, I reflected, without a doubt, the best glimpse of heaven's offerings that I would ever see on Earth.

I lay in bed with with the most beautiful, most special mare in the world, idly watching Celestia’s warm and bright sun slowly rise into the sky, marking the beginning of a fresh new day.

I nuzzled her long, silky blond mane, and she stirred sleepily and snuggled closer to my sky-blue chest, sighing softly. I smiled as I breathed in her sweet apple fragrance.

As I gazed upon her still figure, I was overcome by an unfathomable wave of love for this special gal, for ...my special gal. As I lay there, content with my place in life, I wanted nothing more from life than her soft, yet strong hooves and to gaze into her warm, green eyes.

I rested her head on my shoulder and wrapped a wing softly over her flank, shivering slightly as I encountered her warm, tanned and toned body.

“I love you, sugarcube,” I murmured lovingly in her ear gently.

She remained asleep, but a bright smile stretched across her face, accentuating her freckles.

My gaze lowered slowly down her figure, to her stomach, where looking closely, you could see a small, rounded bulge rising up and down with each of her breaths. I watched it in complete fascination, thinking about the many important things that it represented to me.

Her ultimate commitment to our relationship and love.

My biggest responsibility since becoming the Element of Loyalty and one of the main protectors of Equestria.

The greatest magical miracle in history. One that saw Twilight given a Marebel Peace Prize for her contributions to magical knowledge.

As I contemplated the future, my beautiful farmer gal stirred sleepily and her jade green eyes slowly opened. I kissed her lips softly and she chuckled.

“Morning beautiful,” I whispered to her, my wing running along her flank again.

"G'mornin', Mah little Dashie," she replied and kissed me back. Together we stared at her stomach.

"I can't believe that it's really happening." I marveled, watching our unborn baby gently rise and fall. "We're gonna be ...mothers, with our own flesh-and-blood baby. It.. it just doesn't feel real,"

“What if ah’m not good at bein’ a mother, Dash?” she whispered seriously, seeking reassurance. "What if ah can;t give her what she needs?"

I stroked her cheek with my wing tip and replied; “You will be the best possible mother for her, Jackie. You’re 100% perfect in every way,”

I rested my head on her warm chest and listened to her heart, beating for two now.

“But Dash, Ah ain’t never been a mum afore!” she replied, her eyes widening in panic. “What if ah screw up!?”

I hugged her tightly, and kissed her deeply. Our combined warmth eventually calmed her pumping heart and her breathing settled.

“Applejack, believe me when I say, that I have as little experience at this mothering business as you do. But I know, that we will be good parents. We will support each other through thick and thin. Beside, even if we have trouble, we have your family, including our Pinkie, and our friends will jump at the chance to help us raise little Appleade Dash. Heh, with all of us pitching in, she's gonna grow up to be an awesome filly!”

"Maybe even better than yoreself?" A.J taunted, another smile appearing on her face.

"Well, I don't know about that, but what I will say is that it looks like I have got some sure competition," We laughed for a while, then settled down.

“Ah suppose yer right” she agreed, stroking my wing length. “Ah jest want the best for our child, Dash,”

“I know you do, Sugarcube,”

We lay in comfortable silence for a bit.

“Do you think ah should go out and help Mac? Tis past dawn, and ah remeber what it was like, harvesting all the fields on mah own,"
“Nah, I think he’ll understand today. Besides, it's about time Applebloom learnt the trade, and our friends will pitch in to help us,"

As we predicted, everypony had been ecstatic when we announced that we were expecting. Pinkie being Pinkie, had thrown us a huge Oh-my-gosh-it’s-a-baby-celebration-time-baby-shower-Party, with Rarity promising to make countless magnificent dresses and the like for little Appleade.
Surprisingly, Fluttershy was the loudest and most ecstatic, squeezing me and Applejack in a warm, but tight embrace, with more strength than I had thought possible, coming from her.

The Apple family was the same.

Applebloom was over the moon. “Ya mean to say, Ah’m gonna be an auntie?!” Granny Smith, was banging on about family pride and another strong Apple in the family.

Big Mac the old softie, had let loose a few happy tears before hastily making exit, yelling something about clearing the North orchard. It wasn't until midnight that we were able to extricate ourselves from the shower, even then it was only by telling everyone that Jackie needed her rest.

As we lay together, I turned to face her. "Say A.J, do ya think she's gonna be a Pegasus, or an Earth pony?"

"Ta be honest, it don't really matter to me what she is. She'll be the best no matter what."

"Yeah, your right there," I stared up at the ceiling. "Heart's still set on a wonderbolt though,"

With a chuckle and a smile, Apple Jack jumped on top of me, and locked her lips around mine. We kissed more and more passionately, our lips twisting around the others, tasting each others sweet fragrance.

Eventually, Applejack fell asleep in my embrace and snuffled gently. I watched her, knowing that no matter what, we would deal with anything that got in the way of Appleade's future, come what may.

Together, me and my little Jackie. Forever and ever.

The End

Author's Note:

Welp, this was my first attempt at a one-shot, quick fic. Don't hate too bad.

I AM A FULLY FLEDGED AUTHOR NOW YAAAAY!!!!! I COMPLETED MY VERY FIRST STORY!

As always, leave a like and a fave, and I appreciate you.

You follow me, and I follow you.
P.S thanks to MaggotKing, I've been able to re-write the story so that certain character traits make sense.

Sincerely Yours,
TwilightAppleDash (Tyrone)

Comments ( 38 )

I thought that this was a good one-shot, but it says that it's incomplete, does that mean that there will be another chapter or 2?

Wonderful l'il fic! Love it! You got AJ and Dash just right!

Although... if this is a one-shot, then why is it marked "Incomplete"?

Just curious.

7298691
Sorry, I mucked up when creating

This was so sweet, darling!

7298722
Thanks, I'm glad you think so.

If there is enough hype, I may do a sequel

Aw, so sweet. Both Jackie and Dash are in character, and the romance feels real!

7298784

hehe, cheers for the widespread appreciation. I counted three different bookshelves you added this to. I really appreciate it.

7298797 Hey, it was a good enough story for those three. And thanks for the watch by the way.

7299075 You're welcome, I really liked it :twilightsmile:

I figured Pinkie would throw the baby shower since she is the premiere party pony but still good story

7299213
True, I thought that as the modern thing in trend and fashion, Rarity would be the one to throw it. Plus Ppie would just throw another party, she always does.

7299303 my thoughts were pinkie throws the party like always and Rarity goes crazy making tons of outfits for the shower

7299317 \
Huh that makes sense, I will take that into mind.

7299360
There ya go, I've changed the party thing around. Cheers for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

7299360 feel free to write it in if ya want. I don't mind

It's not bad, but if I'm going to be honest it doesn't seem like something written from Rainbow's perspective. It's far too emotional and sappy in my opinion for a pony like RD.

I promised myself....

See, I don't ship within the Mane Six, but I'm a sucker for AppleDash and RariJack. It's like each ship is a genre. AppleDash usually has the feels, RariJack usually spends most time knowing each other better, TwiDash usually is Twilight being "loosened" up by RD, FlutterDash is usually for taking care for Rainbow, etc.

Long story short, this is my denied-but-guilty-pleasure-but-my-second-AJ-and-Rainbow-ship.

7299384
Yeah, I fhavce changed the story around so that Pinkie throws the baby shower, and rarity just makes lots of clothes.

Now that I think about it, it makes more sense this way around, so thank you for your input. :twilightsmile: :pinkiehappy:

7299405
Your insight does make sense, but I tried to make it deliberately sappy, because I wanted to portray that even a normally strong, steadfast pony like R.D can be affected by the miracle of becoming a mother.

7300081

Well, how do you feel about a RariTwi? I'm already half way through a sequel from their perspective. It does feature a lot of getting to know eachother better.

7301237 It's a good one, right after RariJack.

7301946
That's good, I have never written any ship other than AppleDash, will you will come to realize when checking my stories

Pretty good story!!! I would like to see more of their relationship :rainbowkiss:

Hey there! Noticed this (unlike a senpai) and thought I'd drop a comment!

This was really good! But I have some questions, if you don't mind my asking...?

1. How did Applejack and Rainbow Dash have a foal, considering they're both mares?

2. When you're writing about Applejack kissing RD really deeply and all, they sound like they're in the middle of the baby shower... maybe they should wait until they're home before doing so?

3. How are you so GOOD at writing already????

Will try to add to AppleDash group, if it's not already. Keep up the good work!!

7465477
Firstly, WHY U NO NOTICE ME SENPAI!?

Well, Twilight gave them the ability to produce. (I do hint about it in this story and the loose sequel Party Blues eg The greatest magical miracle in history. One that saw Twilight given a Marebel Peace Prize for her contributions to magical knowledge.)

Secondly, I did a grammar check and added in that they didn't get back til midnight. Cheers for the feedback! :twilightsmile:

7467065

Ah yes, I can see the verification just slipping within my mind's limits now! Much appreciated.

Also found a way to deal with senpai.
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KEEP WRITING! Will continue to look for more fics from you. You officially deserve a mustache :moustache:.

7486956 Would you recommend doing a sequel to it?

7486996 I think I saw the sequel already...

7487099 Like a sequel to the sequel. Party Blues is a loose extension of Slumbering worries. Family is Love will be a direct sequel to Slumbering worries

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