• Member Since 23rd Mar, 2012
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Stormhoof


I want to get my hoof in the door with fanfiction and take a break from my other projects, Open to downright brutal criticism, I am not the best writer, But I am far from the worse.

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After the Best Young Fliers competition Rainbow Dash knew she had left an impression, one that unfortunately faded. Breaking the sound barrier and light spectrum should have immortalized her name, But it didn't. She asks herself what would be more impressive then those two, and even went to Twilight for answers. There had to be some sort of feat she could do, or record she could break, that would Prove her dedication to the art of flying. This is a tale of struggle,pain, and triumph.

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interesting will continue reading if you continue writing

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I actually started writing it a few months ago, seen I had a story I did not submit and was like "Huh, Wonder if it's any good" so I went through and wrote the rest of the chapter XD

"Breaking the Sound Barrier and Light spectrum Should have Immortalized her name, But it Didn't."
1754807 "I did not submit and was like 'Huh, Wonder if it's any good' so"
What's up with the arbitrary capitalization?

1754807 well it looks like it could be a good read, do you at least have anything in mind for something rainbowdash to do that is bigger then the sonic rainboom?

1754876 heh... I have no clue why I do that it just happens... I randomly hit the shift key sometimes...
1754879 My friend, what I have planned is straight up biblical XD

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Now I think I can answer that for my friend
yes, and with that the subject shall meet an end:trollestia:

1754896>>1754897 okie dokie lokie just checking

innnnteresting... :trixieshiftright:

keeping tabs here :twilightsmile:

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