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Toon_Crazy


My Smut account... won't tell from whose account though :3

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7270508 Sorry? Care to explain?

You mean a empty line between paragraphs? I do that because I find it easier to read than have each paragraph next to one another

7270690 I'm sorry, i really don't understand what you mean :twilightoops:

Can you SHOW me what you mean? Because i'm just seeing:

“Have fun, Applejack!” Rarity said, waving her hand as she walked backwards towards the door.

“Wait, you’re not doing this too? Ah thought you wanted to spend time with me.”

“Oh, uh- I’ll just be waiting by the lobby. I already had a massage yesterday. Besides, I’m sure we’ll spend a lot of time together later,” Rarity said, in a mysteriously mischievous tone.

7270690 That didn't look annoying at all. If you ask me, you're getting bent out of shape over nothing. There's also no need to insult the author's intelligence, especially with an insult that doesn't make any sense.

Really? No hypnotism what so ever? This was a great opportunity for a lady-ification fic.............

Dafaq is this Kaneki guy's problem.
Its an artstyle, why is he getting so butthurt

7271663
Hey, sorry that didn't happen :fluttercry:

This story was basically written because I wanted to publish something since my two other stories a year ago D:

I didn't want to write it any longer because I have an issue of commitment. I lose interest rather easily. One day I'm into Wonder Woman, one day I'm into Applejack, etc and maybe I'm into spas, maybe I'm into cosmetic makeover, and so on

So I wrote a short story. And I can assume why the reviews are mixed.

-no sex (I'll admit, I prefer not to write sex because... I dunno, it feels wrong for me. Plus, I'm more of a voyeur and seeing characters expanded, girlyfied, and embarassed is my main kink)

-no hypnosis (I wanted to keep the story short. Plus I also enjoy characters just being embarassed with their new bodies XD)

-it's a short story (yknow. If I had more confidence in my commitment, I would have loved to continue the story with AJ jiggling around in Ponyville with Rarity and having to deal with all the Pervy eyes and even people who know her XD But yeah, I decided I'd stop after the transformation, end with a sorta comedic scene, and the end)

Again, sorry it didn't have feminization/ladyfication/etc. I love that too :heart: but I just wanted to write a short story and publish SOMETHING after over a year of my hiatus
:ajsmug:

i'm glad your back to writing stories.

lol Nice.^^

Not bad, can you focus on your other 2 stories now?

7273386
Well the problem isssss... That my collab partner hasn't been available and I don't want to continue it without her :(

7274010 Ok just checking:scootangel:

Any plans on properly crediting your last story.

It's interesting, though in all honesty, what Rarity did to AJ in this story would be a 100% guaranteed ''get the fuck away from me, I will never be friend with you ever again'' from AJ, if this wasn't explicitly written down...

I am so surprised AppleJack didn't just punch Rarity in the face! :applejackconfused:

7398254 Maybe she's just so flabbergasted at her big boobsies and booty to do that :ajsmug:

Rolls his eyes
Never will get what so sexy about over size breasts, it's un natural. Rather look at a girl that muscular then looking like she had watermelons for a chest and rear

7467339 you heard him he wanted to write something and that expansion and embarrassment are his kinks.

Hey you like muscular women I like goth chicks we all have a kink

7479366 relax wasn't bashing anyone was just commenting :)

7479698 sorry bout that. It's just the way it was worded made it sound a little rude.....then again I did sound like a jerk with the first half of my response

7479706 I don't see how it was rude. Not like I. Was targeting the author or anything l. Shrug

7482038 nah it's not you I was running on an hour sleep when I posted the first reply so it was me not you

I say there should be a sequel where Applejack gets even with Rarity for this.

:ajsmug: "Boy Howdy that would be great, I would love to see Rarity as a down to earth girl like myself."

:raritydespair: "NNNOOOO......That would be The Worst Thing EVER!"

And then rarity was punched in the face for being a huge jackoff, and applejack does not take kindly to being taken adavtnage of.

So Rarity got the spa sisters to turn AJ into Marilyn Monroe. Or her character, Lorelei Lee, from Howard Hawks' "Gentlemen Prefer Blondes" back in 1953.

sequel suggestion: Maybe twilight can open portals in pony world also.

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