I got super confused throughout this chapter.

um, right. Once I figure out what I just read I'll let you know what I think of it

honestly got fucking bored and confused so i skipped abunch of stuff n stuff and didnt really read the chapter sooooooo unlike?

ill keep it bookmarked though just in case i get bored and need something to read

It's okay but enjoyable I'd like to see where this goes

lets see the amount of jumps needed to get to our little horsy friends, and what skills he take from each world

I'm rapidly understanding why discord has such a creative imagination. I sense a dawn of sensible story coming soon.

Right!?!?...

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Good chapter

7686344 half of what you said goes for me as well, and I'm not sure if the really short parts before every timeskip helped that much.

This is probably going to be better when he is finally in a known part Equestria or the present instead of the past.

at first I wasn't sure if he got kidnapped by people that were talking in a different coutry, which is probably okay, but then again you probably wouldn't have needed to create full sentences for that.

Then well drug dealer or whatever.

After that a very short scene to tell that he was raised by two of his own kind until they got killed,...I was kind of sad for the female. In the short time you somehow made it look like the female Draqou.. ...(I have to learn to write that word) would be at least a little bit interessted in him. Then again I got the feeling she wanted to sell him to protect both or just her own life.

in the end I got the feeling the main Char started to get into a loveable parent/child relationship with the murder of his parents.

I guess the timeskips and the cofusing language was worse than everything else and made me skip a few parts.

However like I said, I guess it get's better later, but I hope not every second chapter is going to be interrupted by some sort of "lord evil guy", I just like a good amount of slice and life before shit happens.

some of this writing is well
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7704058 Thanks for the advice.

7686312 yeah but i am a genius and shall tell you what i got, he died, reborn, had farther that was just like a teacher with no love for five years, had mother use him as a reason she should live, failed, both parents died, got banished to another dimension because of being a basted child, got trained in ninja, got sent to soul eater world. = AWESOME.

7771907 You're spot on there, well except the bastard child part you're half right with that.

7772612 cool.