Twilight and her friends have been through many encounters, and faced alot of enemies, but this maybe something that she has have never seen before. On their first interstellar mission on Equetria's first starship Twilight discovers there are some terrors that will freeze your soul. They encounter a ravaged ship with a dying crew member. This is the story of the events leading up to their encounter told through various other characters.
Twilight also realizes that she just might of made her home a target for conquest. and all of this after getting a chilling transmission back from her homeworld.
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Uh.....description please??
Star date totally wrong. Romulans using Borg upgraded disruptors means it is somewhere in the 2410s at least, which puts the stardate in the 90000s
Looks good does this take place after nemesis or during Star Trek online
Also do you or anyone else have or can make a pic of the absentia ? And what class is she?
7377304 Takes place after Nemesis, and i am working on a pic of the Absentia, i replied to you first btw cause your comment seemed more pleasant than the others i get.
7377204 i wrote this when i was getting out of high school, and that was in the 2000's. i never pay much attention to stardates being right or not. i just write for the passion of it just like i do with my art. not to offend you btw, but i get really annoyed with the whole super critical aspect some people develop. dont know why, i should be used it by now after joining this site, but eh.
7377875 dawww your welcome have a pinkie
7377888 btw, do you think you could read over two other stories of mine?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/334250/a-superb-case-of-evil
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/305448/aliens-and-the-three
7377190 ill get to it later today. i just so happen to be updating another story of mine atm. Feel to read one of my other ones and let me know what you think ok.
7377901 well...not sure why you uploaded the fic if you don't have a description for it yet. That's a poor action for a writer to take as it makes you seem like you don't really care about the fic as a description is a very important part of a story and should already be in place before the fic is uploaded
7377912 ITs not perfect but i did put a description. I do have other things to take care of. not to sound rude or anything. Im transscribing the basis of this story from one that i wrote 15 years ago, about the time i was in high school. i have over 30 pages to convert from handwritten to typed.
7377877 Ah. Just an FYI: Romulans using Borg tech is something that happens in 'Star Trek Online'. There is a whole mission chain in the game to destroy the wrecked Borg ship they are studying so they can't upgrade themselves any further that way.
7378277 I get THST and understand. Its just the short description sounded interesting but most people don't read that.
They read the longer one a d a lot of people see the lack of one will automatically downvote and assume you are a poor writer for not having something. So its why I said something.
I wasn't trying to sounds rude or anything its just saying things like "I'll write the description later" after uploading is something THST will automatically turn people off to you as a writer.