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HiddenMac


I can't right

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Starlight Glimmer refuses to befriend Big Mac for being uncommunicative, so she changes the fundamental behavior of who he is. With the stallion unable to control his loquacity, he is forced to express himself using linguistic techniques that were best left hidden.

Warning: Alliteration, Haikus, and Palindromes.

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Comments ( 4 )

All the effort into making Haiku's, palindromes, and alliteration. You have my respect, sir/madam/other. I can't think of a single...

"Eeyup!...puyee"

Never mind, ONE weak literary device. Still, good story.

7266067 Crap! That was a placeholder that slipped into the final draft. Should be fixed now.

7266343 I retract my prior statement then. Still, good story.

That was both hilarious and very impressive. Good job! I don't know why, but I do like seeing Mac in some comedic distress from time to time, and this delivered :eeyup:

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