Big Mac, with a Marshal and a bounty hunter, travels across the West as he looks to save his little sister, learning about his family past along the way.
Thanks, I appreciate it! I admit the excessive commas one on that, though. When I use them like that, I intend it to make it sound like they make small pauses when they speak, but it looks like a punctuation mess in the end to me. And yes, I'll be looking for an editor in the meantime. I can honestly say that I gave one long look at the two chapters and said "It's good enough" then went straight to publishing it.
hmm... tracked out of curiosity
THe picture with the wounded hoof reminds me of the movie 'True Grit'
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Thanks, I appreciate it! I admit the excessive commas one on that, though. When I use them like that, I intend it to make it sound like they make small pauses when they speak, but it looks like a punctuation mess in the end to me.
And yes, I'll be looking for an editor in the meantime. I can honestly say that I gave one long look at the two chapters and said "It's good enough" then went straight to publishing it.
Damn that's some nice cover art.