Big Mac, with a Marshal and a bounty hunter, travels across the West as he looks to save his little sister, learning about his family past along the way.
Interesting story idea. Definitely tracking. Keep an eye on your grammar, got a bit carried away with commas in some of the dialogue. Few awkward sentences near the start, as well. Just be sure to go over everything one more time, and perhaps look into getting an editor.
Interesting story idea. Definitely tracking. Keep an eye on your grammar, got a bit carried away with commas in some of the dialogue. Few awkward sentences near the start, as well. Just be sure to go over everything one more time, and perhaps look into getting an editor.
Looking forward to where this is going.