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Sleepy_The_Zebra


Writing through the pain of High School

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Raised Ire has always been a somewhat... contrary pony, to say the least. (Although really her parents should have expected that, naming her something like 'Raised Ire', especially in Equestria) However, when she actually gets a Cutie Mark in arguing, her parents judge that her contrariness has gone too far and resolve to 'cure' her of it by moving to the least irritable place in Equestria -- which is Ponyville, apparently; maybe they take it out on all the monster attacks? Or maybe the Harmony is contagious. Whatever the reason, Raised Ire's parents are convinced it is true, and are willing to drag her all the way there to 'cure' her of her attitude.

Hooray.


Rated Teen for mild swearing and such.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 17 )

She'll interact with Rainbow Dash and Applejack, right?

7364361 Ray? Probably. If she gets mixed up with the Crusaders, meeting their sisters is a bit of a given.

Mom looked pissed, but her voice didn't waver. "You can't get a Cutie Mark for arguing, dear."

"Oh really? Well then I suggest you look at my ass! See if you can kiss it better. I mean your clearly talking out of your own ass so decency shouldn't be a problem for you." -Raised ire, ie Ray, ie X-ray, ie The red king, ie Brownman,
Nice story by the way. And thank you for the opportunity for terribly awful sub-par jokes.

Curse you for introducing two awesome sounding characters to us only to tell us we're leaving them behind.

I love your descriptions, and Raised Ire amuses me.

Ah... this is on my mind because my own fanfic is about lawyers, but there are actually several ways to get a job in arguing. Bit surprised nopony has suggested any yet...

Looking forward to more hijinks!

7365086 Don't worry, we'll be seeing more of them.
Actually, that was brought up by people, but considering the fact that there seems to be no kind of law system in the show, I'm assuming that position either doesn't exist or is pretty unpopular.

7364970 You're welcome.

Aww... I kinda wanted to see Ire argue her way out of a pinkie welcome party.
That would of been a true test of her skills, and set up some sort of odd rivalry with pinkie constantly trying to set up party's and Ire always trying to get out of them.

It would have been fun.

7646845 That would be fun, but Ray's also a filly, and isn't antisocial, so she wouldn't want to not have a party and arguing her way out of a party wouldn't make sense.

7647196 you are correct, but a pinkie party doesn't seem like her type of scene.
Maybe once ire gets there she could see what type of party it is, and ire could decide where it/she goes from there.

7648842 cool.

See you next chapter, have a nice day.

Yay, there's more! Glad to see she's arrived, and looking forward to seeing what's in that book.

Ray's reaction to Pinkie was so funny.

A cutie mark of blowing glass...
Well, blown glass is used to make vases and flower shapes and things, so you could try something like that.
Especially make it swirly! I love glass art!

7649270 Well, something in that book should be covered next chapter. Hopefully I'll finish with it sooner :twilightsheepish:.

Thanks for your suggestion! I like glass art too; that's part of why I chose it as Chrissie's special talent. Other part is that I have at least a passing knowledge of it, although certainly not much :twilightsmile:.

I am so glad I found this story. I'm really looking forward to Raised Ire's interactions with the rest of Ponyville.

Here's to Raised Ire becoming Ponyville's first talk radio show host.

*Wanders in late like nothing happened*

Glad to see you're still working on this! I like the excerpts from the cutie mark book. I hope the CMC can help Ray out.

8061424 Hello! I'm glad you like the book, I put effort into that :pinkiehappy: As for the Crusaders and Ray, I'm sure they'll help each other out a lot...

Why was this cancelled?

10383804
Technically, it wasn’t (I’ve got another chapter half-written, and I still might come back to it). I just got distracted by other projects and got a bit burnt out on my old fics, sorry about that :ajsleepy:
It may be a while before I start updating this again, unfortunately, but it’s not abandoned!

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