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Summer Dancer


On Wednesdays, we wear PINK!

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On a fine Spring day, Twilight Sparkle sent 49 Pinkie clones into the Mirror Pond instead of 50. But it doesn't have to be this way...

Season 6 Episode 9 spoilers

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Comments ( 44 )

You took one of the best jokes of the episode...
Made it really sad and dark...
And mixed it with Undertale...
Respect:pinkiesmile:

Wow... :fluttercry: I Miss The Real Pinkie! *Cries very hard*

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

Ouch, this was a great story but really disturbing in some ways.

7235464 I must disagree. Her friends where more than to happy help Rarity out on their own.

Damn, you work fast.

Interesting little one-shot, though it feels like just a small snippet of a longer story. However, I'm guessing that was the intention.

7235464
I, uh... I don't follow your logic. Rarity's friends come with her to Manehattan each with a desire to help her, she gives them jobs to do so they can help, they help, they then give an honest account to the guy writing the newspaper article and that's considered manipulating?

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

I knew their would be fanfics about this!

As soon as I saw the word flower I immediately thought Flowey. I bloody love Undertale.

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I paid the 50 bucks to keep the school macbook over the summer and I have the case filled with Sans'. None are in the same AU. :rainbowlaugh:

7235831 LOL!!! Sans is the most interesting character on Undertale!

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If you first played pacifist, he's just a lovable goofball skelle. Then you want to wreak some havoc in the genocide route and then bam your mind is blown when he is revealed to know about all the timelines and your saving and reseting.

7235464 How is "I could really use your help doing all this behind the scenes work" translating into 'hey, if I theoretically get interviewed and you theoretically get interviewed as well, pretty please talk me up to the press or I'll stab you all in your sleep' for you? Besides, all of her friends spent most of the interview jawing on about how much they fucked up. Rarity spent most of the episode locked in a room.

I'll be honest, the Undertale reference takes away most of the weight of this. I feel like this twist could have been done better without the introduction of BURN-THE-BASTARD-IN-HELL Flowey.

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

7235880 The fact remains, she didn't manipulate them in the slightest. All she did was swap out giant hats and get dehydrated.

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

7235902 And now it starts making assumptions about the attitudes of random strangers. Cute.

She spent half the episode in the window display.

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

7235861 It's the most jarring thing ever. Your best buddy in pacifist/neutral is your worst enemy in genocide :ajsleepy:

7235966
You go from being the hero to the villain. And the villain wins.

7235947 Excuse me, but this was one of the best episodes of season 6, if not THE BEST IMO. Rarity had to open an entire new shop on her own, but thankfully, her friends were there for her, just like how they were there for RD when she became a Wonderbolt, and just like how they were there for Twilight when she struggled at being a Princess. That's what friends do--Support one another. Rarity didn't even know they HAD problems. She asked why they didn't tell her that herself. I don't understand how you would see that as manipulation.

7235979 And the game KNOWS!

Comment posted by MJP deleted Sep 9th, 2016

7235947 1. That's not the meaning of literally. In order for that word to be justified in its use, she would have had to stand in the middle of the room not even breathing for the entire episode. And even then, she wouldn't literally be doing nothing. She'd be standing still in the middle of the room.

2.

has some episodes with a fuzzy moral

This statement is true of the series in general. Episodes with fuzzy morals are not exclusive to Rarity.

3.

her episodes are crap

This is an entirely subjective opinion, which, since I have reason to believe you don't know the meaning of that word, means 'based on or influenced by personal feelings, tastes, or opinions'.

4.

she's a crap mary sue who learns nothing / character development is nonexistent wiht her

Both wrong. She has an incredibly large number of flaws, ranging from pride, callousness, being a manipulative bitch, and occasionally being quite shallow. Over the course of six seasons, she has overcome or grown stronger at combatting these flaws and more. She learns a great deal, though most of her lessons really only apply to people with careers and creative ability, and so can easily be overlooked by people who lack one or both.

5.

all her episodes get praised

Wrong. Green Isn't Your Color is lukewarm at best, and Rarity is one of the characters most likely to be criticized and trivialized by the audience for minor transgressions during any appearance in the show.

6.

she is an Underrated character

Unless you are clinically stupid, you meant to use the word overrated, which is technically correct if you make the mistake of spending too long surrounded by Rarity fans.

7.

please explain that to me, oh wait, you can't

And here we see the wild monkey, utilizing its magnificent muscle control to contract its sphincter in such a way that it makes noises, which sound roughly the same as a brazen and ill-informed challenge of a rival male's prowess.
Translation: You're talking out of your ass at this point.
Based on the structure of your admittedly unstructured comment, the thing you are asking me to explain is

how does rarity LITERALLY DOING NOTHING THROUGHOUT THE ENTIRE EPISODE not bother you

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I have literally just explained why this doesn't bother me. Because your statement is false, your arguments are poorly constructed, and just for good measure, I just like the episode.

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Not to mention Flowey stalks you.

The drama in the comment section intrigues me...:trixieshiftright:
Anyways, interesting premise, and I hope for a sequel/more chapters.

I'll be honest I'm not sure if I get it.
I know what the two are, but im not sure the connection. Pinkie went through undertale when she got zapped in the mirror pool? Wouldn't starting over put her pre-zapped, meaning she'd never be there?

7242097 She just needs to jump through the pond :twilightsheepish:

7236006 True. She literally couldn't even exist.
...But that could be seen as doing something: Not existing.
In short, the only way this would be possible is if her entire being along every point of her timeline unraveled, erasing her from reality and ever possibly existing in the first place.

Cannot resist... :pinkiecrazy:

You just had to make me cry,
I want the real Pinkie Pie!
Oh Flower,
The hate I have for you only gives me power!
Besides that, great story;
It's a shame others can't see its glory.
Seriously though,
I'm still sobbing tears and I feel so low!
Didn't know this would be sad,
I should've looked at the tag...

Oh Flowey... even when trying to act nice you find a way to insult something.

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When i saw the vines and the flower i was like "oh god is this going to be undertale trash?" And the i saw flowey mention alphys and i was like "oh god it is..."

But great idea though, having the fake pinkie be the one to live in that episode.

The writers like to troll the fandom a lot. All we know the pinkie we know may not be the real pinkie and there was more then 50 pinkies so the there could be a few more pinkies out there. The Equestria girls pinkie may be a clone too.

MJP

just so u know i hate undertale and it was just a joke, u dont have to take it this far

Okay, that went in a really unexpected direction there. Damn. Have an upvote.

Some things can't be forced. You're smart enough to understand that, aren't you?

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