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Equestrian Beauty

With a new pair of wings and on the cusp of a big break, things are looking up for Spike the dragon as he comes of age. The future's also looking bright for Rarity the unicorn as she continues to expand her business. However, dangerous enemies from the past and present threaten to destroy the idyllic life of Spike, Rarity, and their friends. Caught up in harrowing intrigues in Equestria and beyond, bonds are tested. Can love and friendship really overcome all obstacles?

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Steadfast Hoof #1 · May 19th, 2016 · · ·

Awesome set up! My favote part was the banter between spike and rarity in the woods! Something that threw me for a loop was the pacing at the beginning of the chapter. Everything transitioned a little too fast for me, but that just might be me.

“By the way,” Said Spike sincerely, "Thanks everypony. It was really the most fantastic party I've ever been to. And and it was all for me. That really means a lot. I'll always remember it."

missing a quotation mark, but other than that and the early pacing issue, this looks like it'll become something special! Can't wait for more! Also that song was so cool! Keep up the awesome work!