Love reading Fanfics. Think I might make some myself, not sure yet.
The girls are waiting in Twilight's library for big news from her and Pinkie. This is really just the introduction to a long storie I would be planning on writing. I want to see how well the story would be perceived by the other people here at Fimfiction who would read it. I put a lot of thought into this and I think it came out very well.
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> there own foles
*their, *foals
> we follow the day of Twilight and Stargazer the next day and night
Repetetive message
> storie
singular = story, plural = stories
> I would be planning on writing
I plan to write
> alot
a lot
> I think t came out very good
I think it came out very well
That's all just from the introduction. Sorry.
Firs....
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Sorry about all that, I did this late last night. I was also reading a different Fanfic while doing this one, so sorry that I repeat my self often. Ill fix those up and do better ton the next chapter.
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Am tracking to see where this goes.
I've only read the intro and don't even want to read further on.
little bit of input
the proper way of spelling it is: fillies.
sorry, I'm a huge horse nerd and I go insane when people spell horse terminology wrong.
Mhm.. Go on...
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That's not just horse terminology, that's basic grammar. Plural form of something that ends in -y should become -ies.
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Same here
Ya, this was my first one. Im still going to work on it , because it may give me a jumping point for another story, but I don't think it will be as long as expected. Sry if you didn't like it
Moar?
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Ive been in a state of can't think of anything to write about for ether stories. Plus my laptop broke and I need to get it fixed. IM not writing a 1000 word chapter on a tablet...
It's decent. Personally i don't care for this particular plot, but that's a personal preference, not something you should get dinged for.
main thing i can say is. Type it and re-read it before publishing it. And do make edits, ya know? just cuz it's on hiatus doesn't make you shouldn't make the minor fixes. ya know? :o
I'mma read yo other story now.