• Member Since 16th Apr, 2016
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Myyyystery


I was just doing my imitation of Mystery! Weesnaw! "Well, keep working on it. That was terrible."

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A one shot with Luna ending the chapter like that!? Luna wants some love to.

Only joined 6 days ago and you write this great one shot? I expect great things from you Myyystery :moustache:

7150611 Shh..Don't tell anyone, but I've lurked for far too long and only just now decided to start writing. Also, I have another, more serious story pending approval. It involves guns and an assassin. :pinkiecrazy:

Damn, that was hot...(Heh) Keep up the good work! :pinkiehappy:

This is pretty good keep up the good work.

I love it. Never get tired of human x Celesta.

Celesta has got the best butt of all ponies.

7150736 Jiggly jiggly jigg. :trollestia:

And thank you very much. Glad to hear of your approval.

We Demand Sequel with Both Princesses

7150755 If I can think of a good followup to this, then I would like to do that eventually. But for now, I'd like to focus on Samael. His story's just begun and he needs some friends. :fluttershysad:

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Than we'll wait a royal threesome in Samael's story.

That was... surprisingly okay.

Please sir, can we have a follow up of this story? if ideas are what you need, I could give you some, will that be ok with you?

7151785 Eventually I might do a followup. Shove some ideas in my inbox. But be gentle. I'm still inexperienced. :raritywink:

This is amazing. Well done!

7151955 Thank you very much.

A threesome with Luna is very highly needed.

This story was very well done, good job

7152143 Danke. And to be honest? Been very sleep deprived recently and this was the result. :twilightblush:

Wow, this was wonderfully ok, it needs a secuel with Luna, also my favorite will always be celestia.

Would love for a sequel with Luna getting in on the action

Well, damn, congrats on getting featured. Good story with best horse pony. Keep up the good work :twilightsmile:

Only Celestia come up with humor like that. :trollestia:

Probably the most I've ever laughed because of a clopfic.

You've earned yourself a follow.

My lols are on fire.

A little humorous, but overall unsatisfying.

This is why we can't have nice things.

Nice job! Hot, funny and sexy!
Just the way I like it!:trollestia:

Saw this on the front page and thought that the title was cheesy. Don't read clop too often and decided, 'Why not?'
This is pretty well written. The pacing is perfect, no obvious grammar and/or spelling mistakes, and even thought I do not EVER endorse 2nd person stories, it's perfect for this story!

Well done!

7153494 Danke! Believe it or not, I'm still just getting warmed up when it comes to this sort of thing.

I used to love creative writing, but fell out of it for quite some time. I'm currently relearning a great deal of what I've forgotten and this was a great exercise.

Also, I wrote this on 4 hours sleep and still kinda tripping on melatonin that had me still groggy. :trollestia:

7153432 I try. My inner machinations of my mind are an enigma and sometimes they give me things like this. :raritywink:

7153004 I was actually listening to this when I came up with the title. Well, not this specifically, but a remix:

7152872 I aim to entertain.

7153641 I see. :trollestia:
Well, I will watch you, to see where you might go.

7153093 But I like nice things. :fluttercry:

I'M TRYING MY BEST! :raritycry:

Uh. I don't know how to feel about this.

It's well written though.

7154805 I am so glad to evoke that emotion..Well, any emotion, but I love that feeling of "What did I just read?" Thank you :trollestia:

Eyyy, that was hilarious! A watch and da like for ye, fine specimen of my species which can write!

7154862 It was a fun write, to be fair. :pinkiehappy:

7154889 So you're secretly a seahorse too?

S...sequel...please ?

7153650 fitting red sun over paradise, I'm sure that guy was in paradise from how described it.

Metal Gear Rising Revengence was such a good game.

7150669 We know what tickles your fancy :raritywink:

Oh please continue this!! A multi chapter fic would be great! This is VERY well done. :trollestia:

i like this smoehow.... will there be more

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When I get some more serious writing done, I'll start work on a sequel. I just need to work out where I want it to go as well. :twilightsheepish:

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