A new villain with a ridiculous gimmick - the ability to hypnotize people with her chest - appears to menace the Power Ponies. She seems to be dealt with easily enough, but she just might actually be one step ahead of the Power Ponies.
Btw, you might wanna find a different cover for the story if it isn't going to take place in the Equestria Girls universe. And if it Is it might be best to use the Equestria girls tag.
That was fun! Would have enjoyed it if it had kept going, but it was a neat, episodic length as it was. Good use of perennially overlooked sidekick, I liked the resolution.
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I really liked this, a little over the top, but still really good. I think the best answer to your final dilemma would have been to do two endings, a good and bad, but this was a fun read either way.
Maybe that's how she differs. She has tits as big as her eyes! Brace for comments about back pain and sag, and questions about how she can walk upright at all!
but she actually almost won and would have the Power Ponies as her servants if not for Humdrum.
Please, the Mane-iac almost won and would have drowned Maretropolis in hair (euge) if not for Humdrum. Seriously, it's like he's got the only super power worth a damn of the lot of them.
7227692 You are not into macro? Shoot, i was going to ask, if you could do a story about an alternate Version of Saddlerager. One that is already the physically strongest member of the power ponies, when in her base form and grows bigger (and Bustier) due to arousal instead of Anger, (kinda like "size of the sun" by megapone and "an expansive Demonstration" by kifstopher) who has to restrain herself so she doesnt loose controll and accidentaly destroys the city
7229544 Any Chance for another regular sized, but well endowed powerpony story? I really liked this one, and while i like megapone, half of his stories are futa.
Unlikely. As much as I would like to, I have ... extenuating circumstances that affect how much I can write, so I'm not willing to commit to anything. But had I the time ... sigh.
And yeah, a few less futa fics would be nice. Like, I just want to see Twilight and company mind controlled, is it too much to ask to not have to deal biological abnormalities in every MC fic? It feels like that, sometimes ...
7231690 I think I would look forward to either of that. There are different levels of "bad" ending after all, and this story seems like the kind where even the bad ending wouldn't be quite that horrible for anyone (what with the Contessa being a non-violent villain and even more or less saying that she didn't care to ruin their civilian IDs).
Really enjoyed the story. Whether it's more of this continuity or something completely different, I think I will like all hypnosis/MC related stories coming from you. Definitely will be watching you.
7231690 I actually enjoyed this having a good ending. I wouldn't mind an alternate dark chapter though. As I was reading, I realized that this was one example of mind-control that terrifies me, ironic because the usual types of mind control turn me on and yet it's the more explicitly sexual one that turns me on and scares me...
yeah but....come on, who wants the supervillain with the stupid power to win?
PLus all this time I was thinking of the Maneiac as the Joker in that one episode of batman where everyone thinks some random shmuck killed the bat....
let's just say, the random shmuck does not want to be there when the true archenemy comes in to meet the person who stole their kill.
The reporter turned to the side. “Is this for real? Oh. Okay, this is for real. Ahem. To undo the effects of her breast milk was found. She is now in prison, where she is under tighter restrictions now that the extent of her powers is known, including an anti-lactation pill designed by Maretropolis’ very own Twilight Sparkle. This has been J. Jonah Jameson Junior reporting. Stay tuned for my contractually obligated anti-Spider smear ads.”
The passenger officer looked over his chair and noticed Contessa's exposed breasts.
Once they were gone, she opened the fridge and pulled out the bottle of milk.
If I ran out, the only I could get more would be to ... visit her ... in prison."
into prisons and ask to see supervillains because they had milk!
"Mmm ... this has to got to stop."
"Yes ... that's it." The Contessa whispered. "Just stare at my breasts."
“Yes.”(—— The Contessa went on. “Staring at my boobs is making you hard. Soo hard. Harder than you’ve ever been, in fact. You can feel yourself filling up with hot masculine fluids … ”
“Well …” Twilight put a finger to her chin. “We know it has something to do with milk … and boobs … our big, soft, bouncy, flouncy -” Twilight slapped herself across the cheek to get a hold of herself. “Anyways. What do we know about that?”
“I’ll go see if I can find something to help.” Rarity said, getting up. “Maybe some candles for concentration or a shock collar or something.”
be able to figure out how to cure her before she was compelled to feed all of you.
They remained unable to to strike her, even though she was inches from them,
I'll be sure to read this real soon!
Btw, you might wanna find a different cover for the story if it isn't going to take place in the Equestria Girls universe. And if it Is it might be best to use the Equestria girls tag.
Perfect ending
*cough* http://dc.wikia.com/wiki/Nina_Dowd_%28New_Earth%29 Don't think that's a slam against the idea, I'm fine with it. I just thought you were doing a crossover fic at first.
So apparently this is my fetish as well.
Ugh.
That was actually pretty good. I guess a story about boobs gets that a lot, but still.
That was fun! Would have enjoyed it if it had kept going, but it was a neat, episodic length as it was. Good use of perennially overlooked sidekick, I liked the resolution.
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Aw, do I have to? I wanted it to be a human Rarity, and I wouldn't want to use someone's art without permission. and I ... don't have and refuse to make a Deviantart or Derpibooru account for personal reasons.
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I apologize for disappointing you.
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Is that really so bad? Also, your avatar is perfect for a comment like that.
oh my a Villainess who controls others with boobs
well nice story and....spots Rarity flashing her boobs and gets hypnotized...... boobs........
Well then, seems like someone has been visiting Tvtropes, no?
7226413 I have enough gained fetishes thanks to Megapone, I really don't need more.
On a side note, if you had had some macro in this, I probably would have smashed that like button.
I really liked this, a little over the top, but still really good. I think the best answer to your final dilemma would have been to do two endings, a good and bad, but this was a fun read either way.
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Ah, yes, him.
Well, unfortunately, I'm not really into macro.
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Noooooo. Whatever gave you that idea?
If she's anything like the rest, her eyes are literally bigger than her tits.
I am unimpressed.
now this was good.
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Maybe that's how she differs. She has tits as big as her eyes! Brace for comments about back pain and sag, and questions about how she can walk upright at all!
Please, the Mane-iac almost won and would have drowned Maretropolis in hair (euge) if not for Humdrum. Seriously, it's like he's got the only super power worth a damn of the lot of them.
On a somewhat less snarky note,
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Too bad... If the Contessa ordered Rarity to take care of Spike, as a bimbo, maybe she could win
7227692 You are not into macro? Shoot, i was going to ask, if you could do a story about an alternate Version of Saddlerager. One that is already the physically strongest member of the power ponies, when in her base form and grows bigger (and Bustier) due to arousal instead of Anger, (kinda like "size of the sun" by megapone and "an expansive Demonstration" by kifstopher) who has to restrain herself so she doesnt loose controll and accidentaly destroys the city
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Nope, I am not. If may make a suggestion, you might want to try asking those authors you mentioned to do it.
7229544 Any Chance for another regular sized, but well endowed powerpony story? I really liked this one, and while i like megapone, half of his stories are futa.
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Unlikely. As much as I would like to, I have ... extenuating circumstances that affect how much I can write, so I'm not willing to commit to anything. But had I the time ... sigh.
And yeah, a few less futa fics would be nice. Like, I just want to see Twilight and company mind controlled, is it too much to ask to not have to deal biological abnormalities in every MC fic? It feels like that, sometimes ...
Any chance of a bad end bonus chapter? I really loved the fic but Don't enjoy happy endings in these types of stories
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Yes, actually. Despite what I was telling proclarushtaonasat, a bad end would be great, and much less work than a full-fledged sequel.
... at some point.
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I think I would look forward to either of that. There are different levels of "bad" ending after all, and this story seems like the kind where even the bad ending wouldn't be quite that horrible for anyone (what with the Contessa being a non-violent villain and even more or less saying that she didn't care to ruin their civilian IDs).
Really enjoyed the story. Whether it's more of this continuity or something completely different, I think I will like all hypnosis/MC related stories coming from you. Definitely will be watching you.
7231690 I actually enjoyed this having a good ending. I wouldn't mind an alternate dark chapter though. As I was reading, I realized that this was one example of mind-control that terrifies me, ironic because the usual types of mind control turn me on and yet it's the more explicitly sexual one that turns me on and scares me...
yeah but....come on, who wants the supervillain with the stupid power to win?
PLus all this time I was thinking of the Maneiac as the Joker in that one episode of batman where everyone thinks some random shmuck killed the bat....
let's just say, the random shmuck does not want to be there when the true archenemy comes in to meet the person who stole their kill.
oh, god a dragon papyrus.
Isn't that the astronaut?
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No. That's the reporter on the Daily Bugle who hates Spider-Man.
His son, John Jonah Jameson III, is the astronaut.
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No a taughting scroll
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