When a nameless pony awakes in a blood splattered stable remembering nothing, her story takes a long and twisting road as she finds out who she was before and who she wants to be.
Well Dawn seems like an interesting character, but I hope that you don't drag out the amnesia angle of the story. And that there is something unique about this story. I just hope that it will not be a re-skin of FoE. Anyway, good luck with it.
7174226 Thank you so much for the critique!!! I really appreciate it! The amnesia deal lasts a bit but hopefully not annoyingly so. No worries about reskin's here. Which I do hope you soon see!!! Thanks again Dark!!!! Much love!
Well Dawn seems like an interesting character, but I hope that you don't drag out the amnesia angle of the story. And that there is something unique about this story.
I just hope that it will not be a re-skin of FoE.
Anyway, good luck with it.
7174226 Thank you so much for the critique!!! I really appreciate it! The amnesia deal lasts a bit but hopefully not annoyingly so. No worries about reskin's here. Which I do hope you soon see!!! Thanks again Dark!!!! Much love!