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Dr Atlas


"When I get old, I am going to be: Rice. Frisco style." - Ed 2004

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This story is a sequel to Starlight Glimmer: New Queen of The Changelings


After she finally found her way home, Chrysalis couldn't wait to be reunited with her children.
Unfortunately, once she did, she found out that, during the time of her absence, they've found a new queen to lead them.

She doesn't take the news well...

Author's not so long, very strange, unneeded, kind of weird notes: Truth be told, you don't really have to read the other story to not understand this one. Starlight just now (regretfully) rules over Chrysalis's subjects, nothin' too shocking here...

This one's also a three part-er, with even more cliffhangers!

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 45 )

Oh god, this won't end well.

Luckily, the current tags tell me that nothing really bad should happen to Chryssie... Well, except for maybe an aneurysm from her subjects' sheer stupidity.

Cant wait to see the next chapter. I wonder if we'll get some hint a DoomiePie?

7180892 "O-oh, I didn't know you were stupid, your majesty."

7181485 *watches the top of the hive explode from a safe distance while the anguished cry of a certain royal bug can be heard*

Chrysalis raised an eye, still not understanding half the things this hooded woman was saying to her.

:trixieshiftright:

Chryssie really is a shouty sort, isn't she.

Well. That escalated quickly, although I'm not surprised. Her changelings are kind of... dumb as a sack of bricks if they considered Sombra or Discord good leader choices. (One single mindedly insane with a canon preference for slavery and another one who would probably declare himself their new king before turning them purple, bombarding them with exploding marshmallows before getting bored and leaving...)

Well Chrissy, are you going to do the dog-ownership trick, or battle to the death? Because neither will end well for you....
Keep going! ;)

I think this is going to be good. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Next chapter is needed to get an opinion on the story.

Twig, your observation skills are legendary and extremely useful.

This won't end well, will it? Well, it's marked as comedy, so let's see what happens next! :pinkiehappy:

“Speaker went away, and...uh, no one’s seen him or his band of siblings ever since.”

Huh, I wonder if thats a reference to Catherine the Great

Welp, things are going to get very loud, and very, very awkward very quickly now...

7183724

Your inspiration, perhaps?

7386399 That's a funny clip. Although you'd think that being a God the explosion would have been bigger.

That ending oh that ending. I can't wait for next chapter this...this is going to be epic!

-BFBL

So... Is there a single competent person in the whole of Equestria?

Chryssie and her dynamic entry.

[…] but at least Pinkie got a lingfriend out of it […]

I have a hunch that this will be elaborated on in later chapters.

“Hey, cool, the lampshades already set up.”

Hey, I thought my TV Tropes abstinence was going so well… confound you Dr. Atlas
Though, to be honest, I’m not sure what part of it threatens the Willing Suspension of Disbelief in the first place.

7386399 Hercules: Muichandising! Muichandising!

Seriously? That can only end in one way. A duel.

The only thing that is in question now - is Starlight gonna phisicly change into a changeling? I sooo hope she does, it's a wonderful concept even if cliche.

And now things can go from bad to worse. And awkward. And funny, for us at least!

Now this will be interesting, seeing as how Princess(!) Twilight probably has more power than a beaten queen by now.

And that's not counting Starlight herself. Yeah, this should be fun.

Those Changelings are really racist.

Their shapeshifting abilities allow them to infiltrate anything, anywhere, anytime!

I suddenly have to think of this:
:twilightangry2:: "He could be in this very room! He could be you! He could be me! He could even be-"
Any idea what could happen next?

7406321 Soldier shoots Twilight's head off?

7409228 Which soldier do you mean?
[I mean from this story. Not from the original.]

7410110 Did she at least turn red?

7410824 nah, turns out the Spy was the lampshade.

7387271 I believe that line is a reference to Dr Atlas's other story https://www.fimfiction.net/story/263445/doyou

The queen smiled. “I have many predictions, more time travel, powerful magic that surpasses Twilight, maybe even some mind control of her friends.”

Did you watch the latest episode yet? (S6E21, "Every Little Thing She Does")


Nice story!

You did good with the dialoge between the tree.
Verry funny and hilarious, just like the rest of your story!

Say, is it over now? The status says "complete", but it looks like there might come more. Kind of open-ending.
Maybe a sequel or something?

Hmm, interesting. Seeing the latest episode, yeah, I can see that happening.

While Chryssie doesn't want to be friends with ponies, I imagine she would rather simply fake being friendly to stockpile love and help her children, lying in wait for Starlight's turn.

That face when you realize that )with exception to the time traveling), Chrysalis was technically correct...
Keep going! ;)

Chrysalis definitely doesn't want to take no for an answer. And can't really see what she did wrong.

So you want this to head down the path of evil, or was that just a snippet of what-if that won't happen?

Either way, still a good read!

you should make a sequel for this

You gave me flashbacks to Spec Ops: The Line. I was so confused.

Also:

hostel

*hostile
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I think the mind wants more evil fics...

Cliffhanger ending? I hope the eventual sequel won't be a serenade...

7604359 more bad ending sequals yay (squeeing in delight) (dang it i'm not proud of that)
these fics are really really good (i just wish there were more of them)

downvoted for being pure bugmom bashing bullshit.

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