• Member Since 18th Feb, 2016
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Blackdust


New to writing, but really wanna try and get things out. Oh, and if you follow me, I'll follow you back. Something I got in the habit of doing back on Twitter.

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Jackson Greycastle, a 8 year old boy with the mind set of someone thrice his age, got his one day wish, as did Flora Everglow, a unicorn that has seen 8 winters and still can't levitate anything, when they both wish for something similar enough and close enough in the reality lines, or ley lines as humans call them, that a certain reformed trapped demon of reality decides to help them both. Turns out that in doing so he found out how to free himself and help others as well. But it all comes at a price as nothing is free... What is the price for this human to live his dream?


Other character tags will be added accordingly. I also have nods to Matrix in this story, so keep your eyes peeled!

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 8 )

Well that was short.

Although I like really smart kids that act much older than they really are, I think 8 is a little to young to go to college and find a cure for cancer.

But not going to judge until shit happens.

7114289 Eh. Read Heavens Gift. His character wasn't much older than Jackson.

It's a little short to judge the story. I'm not sure where the story will go.

7124310 Made a blog about the basic arc if you wanna go read it. I'm gonna add a lot more than what's in the blog though.

I'll be completely honest. I wish you'd type a little more than 500 - 1K words. It's a good idea, and obviously good writing, so why not write a little more? I'll be patient.

7125166 It's a work in progress... I don't plan on leaving it just yet.

Too bad. Pretty good so far.

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