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Nikiroo


Yip. I'm an avid reader, would like to try my hooves at writing (I blame all those fanfictions I read!) and... well, you can only say so much in 200 characters, I'm no Twitter fan... I like chocolate?

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A lost changeling, blasted away into the Everfree forest, tries his best to get back to the hive.
But when he finally manages to escape that dreadful place, it is only to be found by... Fluttershy!
She, who fought his all-powerful Queen helped only by five other ponies, and won.
She, whose feats of arms were already whispered widely thorough the hive before she even stopped their Queen.
She, who is now in front of him...
Life is unfair.

Chapters (6)
Comments ( 21 )

just wanted to say this story of yours is one of the best with fluttershy!enjoying so much! congrats to you on this very fine story!

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Thank you --- it's nice to start the day by reading such comments :)

Next chapter is in the works (I was actually checking here before starting on it in case the story so far was flamed down by an angry mob! Guess I was wrong! :D)

Enjoying your story! Looking forward to reading more.

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Thanks :)

The next chapter should be there quite soon, if I can get some time off to finish and edit it.

yeah another excellent chapter in your fine story! it was so worth the wait!all i can say is thank you for this! it is so heart warming!! well done!!

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Thanks!

I've burned through half of my "Read it Later" list, so hopefully I should get more time to write :)

Why don't she just ask him?
Oh right, she is shy.

Why is there so many words that look like *this*? I *do* mean it could set a tone for something like this, but *this* is overdoing it a *bit* too much.

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Hmm.. you *are* right! (Sorry, could not resist...)

Out of the 5 or 6 uses I made of them, one is obviously not needed and a few should really be changed so not to use bold.
I basically encoded the whole chapter (from paper to computer) and directly uploaded it.
It seems I should also check again on the computer, some mistakes are less obvious on paper :(

(Now I guessed you aked about the usage of the * and bold, not the presence of them? I simply chose to let my script keep the * when adding the bold tags, since they are in the original text.)

I think I may yet fix that during the next update...

Thanks for the notice.

oh my this gonna be interesting if Shining Eyes comes to the picnic.

either he manages to keep himself being a changeling a secret with Fluttershy's help or the girls will find out about him.

cant wait to see what happens.

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.. hopefully in not too long :)

This story is quite good!
An like and favorite, I give you.
And so, I will watch this, understood?:twilightsmile:

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Aye, aye, sir ! :p
Worry not, it's not abandoned, I just have a lot of (non fanfic writing) work at the momemt.
Maybe with time I'll write a bit quicker, too.
At least, the current chapter is nearing completion.

See you!

great to the story continuing,well done!

And what's the worst that could happen?

Famous last words :derpytongue2:

no tags at all Adventure, slice of life nothing?

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Indeed?
I mean, none of the tags in https://www.fimfiction.net/tag-information seem to apply.
Maybe Drama, but I think it would be a stretch.

Do you think one does?

8067943 slice of life if nothing else it pretty much goes with anything

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