• Member Since 18th Mar, 2014
  • offline last seen Dec 6th, 2023

MaskofLimbo


Just a dude who likes MLP and wishes to share my stories, focusing more in crossover

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Angry to how her daugther talk to her, Spoiled Rich give herself a princess day to relax, but when her carriage take a long time to return, a stallion, that was also going home, offers to take her home safely.


ATTENTION: I don't know if I portrayed Spoiled correctly, so please go easy on me.

A little crossover with the game Persona 4. HEAVY SPOILERS!

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 3 )

"You've got some guts, spying on me while I'm doing my business. Just don't anyone else know, or else my act's going to bite in the ass."

7096097 Hehehe, no worries, pal. After all, I had to do this to someone I apreciate. Accept this as a...little tribute.

Not bad. Could use more salt though. Curious on why Adachi- I mean Jester- was there in the first place. Overall this was nice characterization. Would be cool to see you open this up more, giving more life to the story.

If you ever come back, that is. :twilightsheepish:

Side note: Persona has it's own tag, so you can add that in if you want.

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