Three months, it's been three months since Pinkie disappeared. There have been multiple search parties, family members constantly questioned, even pony Twilight came over. She was never found, but one day she did come back, but... different.
Question: Why is this in the Oversaturated World group? The Oversaturated World deals with stories set in a specific verse. This story actually violates some of the rules of that verse.
>> Right now, yes. But, later on, the story will focus more on the current human world. Both superhuman things, and some magic will be involved. But if it bothers you that much, you can remove it.
I'm not that sick... but, I did love the idea of torture in general, which I've been thinking of implimenting into one of the stories that I'm writing. Hopefully I can get it right.
But, I love this story so far because, while I think the show itself is good... to me, it's too inocent, and needs more stuff like this story... after dark. Lol
Blake said to Igneous, the main ‘interrogator’ of the Syndicate. He was average size, somewhere around five ten. He had short, spiky, bleach blonde hair, which was obviously dyed that way. He had dark blue eyes, and a pointy nose, which made him strangely alluring. Other than that, his features were fairly normal. He wore a leather jacket with a black shirt underneath, wearing black pants with chains around the pockets. Wearing matching black shoes, and a golden skull necklace around his neck. Unless someone were to pay close attention to his hands, it would go unnoticeable. But, he had a pain tattoo on the knuckles of his left hand, with a gain tattoo on his right. He was also fairly built, noticeable by the cut sleeves on his leather jacket, revealing his muscles, and the many tattoos on them. He had skulls, dragons, demons, and many other numerous things on his arms, who knows the stories behind him.
Ouch, I think I cut myself on the edge. Seriously, with the way this guy dresses I can't take him seriously. Dude's a total tryhard edgelord.
It was a skull mask
....
The only thing I ask is for you to wear your mask, it adds a certain element of horror
Oh noes 3spoopy5me. Seriously, either Igneus was being incredibly sarcastic or he's the worlds biggest pansy.
But, his favorite change about her wasn’t anything about her body, it was her eyes. They were dark, full of emotions and pain, and they were beautiful. This girl was perfect, and he hadn’t even started on her yet.
Oh go jack off to Linkin Park.
throbbing, ten inch cock
If you said this loser had a microdick I might have believed you, but ten inches? Nope.
Not only will I torture you, but I will discipline you. I will make you loyal to us, make you never even want to question us, or your father.
Dude, keep in mind that this is the future leader of the syndicate. You're not going to survive once she takes over.
Why did you make chapter two so long?
7620521 I like to be... descriptive.
Question: Why is this in the Oversaturated World group? The Oversaturated World deals with stories set in a specific verse. This story actually violates some of the rules of that verse.
>> Right now, yes. But, later on, the story will focus more on the current human world. Both superhuman things, and some magic will be involved. But if it bothers you that much, you can remove it.
7620569 Why not make the rest of the chapters that long?
7901925 First chapter was only that long to help show her personality change, I have no intention of making a chapter that long again. Too much work.
So...
I jacked off to the rape scene--JK JK JK!!!!!!!
I'm not that sick... but, I did love the idea of torture in general, which I've been thinking of implimenting into one of the stories that I'm writing. Hopefully I can get it right.
But, I love this story so far because, while I think the show itself is good... to me, it's too inocent, and needs more stuff like this story... after dark. Lol
That's my peace, onto the next chapter.
Considering she's on a drug that enhances both pleasure and pain...
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Ouch, I think I cut myself on the edge. Seriously, with the way this guy dresses I can't take him seriously. Dude's a total tryhard edgelord.
....
Oh noes 3spoopy5me. Seriously, either Igneus was being incredibly sarcastic or he's the worlds biggest pansy.
Oh go jack off to Linkin Park.
If you said this loser had a microdick I might have believed you, but ten inches? Nope.
Dude, keep in mind that this is the future leader of the syndicate. You're not going to survive once she takes over.