• Member Since 22nd Oct, 2015
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DarkMidnight


Just an obsessive brony writing about ponies... not much else to say

Comments ( 7 )

First try?
Good Lil Story.
Why no milk?

I liked it writing pacing was good I don't see anything that needs work except you need to be more descriptive in the sex scenes and by that I mean like how they feel and how they're muscles contract but other than that good job.

This is very much intriguing l:3

I enjoyed it a lot. Thanks for the good read.

Ohoho! Hah! Oh boy... I want this to continue so bad.

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