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Is this guy manus or something?
A yes the abyss a dark force the creates and attracks all mater of helish creatures and people I wonder how the girls will deal with such a primordial force
9006505 Yup.
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Oh boy I eagerly wait for your take on EQG vs DS boss
9006537 So do I. I do so love pitting innocence against malice~
“That is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons even death may die.” - Necronomicon
I can honestly hope that the one posing as Manus isn't in fact a 4chan anon.
They are the stuff that *evil* pisses itself whenever mentioned.
As a point aside, describing the hair colour of the main heroines is unnecesary - as the readers already know of them, and it is known as 'lavender unicorn syndrome'. This type of description best used for describing new arrivals - like Pinkie's uncle Veteran Pie - just once.
You can remove the boldened descriptors, and you'll have a neater, less 'purple-prosey' description that works just fine.
Other than that, I'll be waiting for future posts of this story!
Any chance this will pick up again?
9738833 I plan to, though a good few other stories are currently taking precedence, I'm afraid.
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I....I can't believe no one else has thought to use Manus, The father of the abyss, The only enemy in Dark Souls one I actually dreaded fighting only because I could never find any summon signs near the bosses. I will admit I am not good at dealing with bosses solo. And I usually needed a summon or two to kill the bosses. But using the Primeval man.....You have my attention.
10646081 Thank you. I plan to update this story as soon as I can.
Hope you gals are prepared to die.