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Timeless Lord Slayer


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Is this guy manus or something?

A yes the abyss a dark force the creates and attracks all mater of helish creatures and people I wonder how the girls will deal with such a primordial force

9006527
Oh boy I eagerly wait for your take on EQG vs DS boss

9006537 So do I. I do so love pitting innocence against malice~ :pinkiecrazy:

“That is not dead which can eternal lie. And with strange aeons even death may die.” - Necronomicon

I can honestly hope that the one posing as Manus isn't in fact a 4chan anon.

They are the stuff that *evil* pisses itself whenever mentioned.:pinkiecrazy:

As a point aside, describing the hair colour of the main heroines is unnecesary - as the readers already know of them, and it is known as 'lavender unicorn syndrome'. This type of description best used for describing new arrivals - like Pinkie's uncle Veteran Pie - just once.

"So, what's been going on with you girls?" asked Sunset, her yellow and red striped long hair waving in the wind coming from the windows a bit.

You can remove the boldened descriptors, and you'll have a neater, less 'purple-prosey' description that works just fine.

Other than that, I'll be waiting for future posts of this story! :moustache:

Any chance this will pick up again?

9738833 I plan to, though a good few other stories are currently taking precedence, I'm afraid.

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I....I can't believe no one else has thought to use Manus, The father of the abyss, The only enemy in Dark Souls one I actually dreaded fighting only because I could never find any summon signs near the bosses. I will admit I am not good at dealing with bosses solo. And I usually needed a summon or two to kill the bosses. But using the Primeval man.....You have my attention.

10646081 Thank you. I plan to update this story as soon as I can.

Hope you gals are prepared to die.

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