Spike receives a letter one day giving him valuable insight in the ways of a dragon. His journey will take him past his normal boundaries and into a land unknown, where the best option might be to turn around.
A human finds himself in Equestria. His tale of adventure and treachory is told after the fact, from the mouth of a criminal. This is the tale of a broken man and a beaten soul. But the true question is whether or not his sanity remains.
One human finds himself sitting on a bench at the end of his journey. His past is nothing but the past now. Maybe that is something he has to accept before he can see the future clearly.
I'm not the type of person who would simply favorite a fic that seemed good, I'm very critical about what I choose to favorite or even read. And I am telling you, this made it into my favorites. I liked the writing style, the way you used nature to define the mood of the story. It was good (though you might want to fix the start, something sounded a bit off.)
Also, the impact at the end was also had a very good build-up. This is one of the few fics that actually got me to read the whole thing without skimming past descriptive paragraphs.
Again, good job.
EDIT: holy crap your other story (Cup of coffee) was another of the few fics I actually liked. Lol what a coincidence. But it's going to take more than that to get me to follow XD
7033634 I hadn't, but thanks for linking it, I do enjoy reading stories that are similar. I usually post my thought process about each of my stories a week or two after I'd completed them, so if it interests you how I thought of my story, I recommend reading that when it's released.
Also while I'm here, I'd like to thank all of you who'd read or commented on my story. I may not comment much, but that doesn't mean I don't read and appreciate them all.
Now these, these feels right here, were the kind of feels I was trying to evoke in one of my stories.
Well done sir, straight onto my favourites shelf
Great story.
I'm not the type of person who would simply favorite a fic that seemed good, I'm very critical about what I choose to favorite or even read. And I am telling you, this made it into my favorites. I liked the writing style, the way you used nature to define the mood of the story. It was good (though you might want to fix the start, something sounded a bit off.)
Also, the impact at the end was also had a very good build-up. This is one of the few fics that actually got me to read the whole thing without skimming past descriptive paragraphs.
Again, good job.
EDIT: holy crap your other story (Cup of coffee) was another of the few fics I actually liked. Lol what a coincidence. But it's going to take more than that to get me to follow XD
I’m curious: did you read this story first?
https://www.fimfiction.net/story/40581/4/flutterstalker-the-mare-who-molested-me/epitaph
I see several parallels...
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I hadn't, but thanks for linking it, I do enjoy reading stories that are similar.
I usually post my thought process about each of my stories a week or two after I'd completed them, so if it interests you how I thought of my story, I recommend reading that when it's released.
Also while I'm here, I'd like to thank all of you who'd read or commented on my story. I may not comment much, but that doesn't mean I don't read and appreciate them all.
...Damn that one man-tear, it betrays me everytime
Would you do me the favor and give this fic a cover art?
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Cover art? I tend to avoid images, but I'll see what I can do.
let's find out what google images has for me.
Edit: Tell me what you guys think about the image, and thank google.
7060333 That's better :)
Rereading this, and it still feels utterly awesome