Equestria is not the land of sunshine and rainbows behind the scenes, and it may take an immortal angel from another world to unveil the truth. An Angel Beats displaced fic
8199121 It was so fun to write! I chose 5 deaths as an arbitrary number, and then I had to figure out how to kill her over and over. I'm going to have a LOT of fun killing her with this next chapter.
8201989 AGREED!!! Yo write it, I'll crossover with it.
On a related note, I do have a Nanoha crossover fic in mind. Post-A's pre-StrikerS, starts between Seasons 3 and 4, humanized (mostly, horns and wings) Equestria. The Elements are Intelligent Devices, the Crystal Heart and Tree of Harmony are Lost Logia, Celly and Lulu have some experience with ancient Belka, all that fun stuff. I've got the outline all written up and ready to go, but I want to get a LOT further on this, A Heart Eclipsed, and It's Not Easy Being Orange before I jump into it.
I thought I had put the part where I said that might be the reason in that comment... meh, whatever. Point is, I dun care. I have since ceased reading this story. From what I've seen (up to the beginning of chapter 2) it's rushed, the fact that the character is, y’know, fucking immortal kinda kills all potential tension in any combat situation that could happen in this story. The fact that they regard their unusual sudden knowledge of how to do things and then completely toss it to the window due to “fuck it. I got powers. Don't need to know how I know how to use them.” Just really irritated me for some odd reason.
But of course, to each their own. I don't hate the story, just not interested in it due to some of the reasons stated above. Also the fact that they didn't wait long for a crossover. You need time to set up the world properly, before you crossover.
Actually there's a whole list of things I could point out that offsets me from continuing this story. But this comment is long enough, so I will end it here.
8220860 Actually, if you don't mind, could you send me a PM with what all you don't like about it? I'm trying to improve my writing and I can't do that without feedback, especially constructive criticism. Thanks for giving it a shot.
8190569 He also makes a cameo appearance in Echo the Diamond Dog. Which is the fic that started that whole group.
Well, shit...
Omg. That testing scene had my laughing so hard.
8199121 It was so fun to write! I chose 5 deaths as an arbitrary number, and then I had to figure out how to kill her over and over. I'm going to have a LOT of fun killing her with this next chapter.
Hilarious as always
We need a Nanoha displaced in my opinion, it's a rather underappreciated series.
8201989 AGREED!!! Yo write it, I'll crossover with it.
On a related note, I do have a Nanoha crossover fic in mind. Post-A's pre-StrikerS, starts between Seasons 3 and 4, humanized (mostly, horns and wings) Equestria. The Elements are Intelligent Devices, the Crystal Heart and Tree of Harmony are Lost Logia, Celly and Lulu have some experience with ancient Belka, all that fun stuff. I've got the outline all written up and ready to go, but I want to get a LOT further on this, A Heart Eclipsed, and It's Not Easy Being Orange before I jump into it.
Ha!
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Glad you've been enjoying it.
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And Im glad to enjoy it!
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Yeah, no shit.
I thought I had put the part where I said that might be the reason in that comment... meh, whatever. Point is, I dun care.
I have since ceased reading this story. From what I've seen (up to the beginning of chapter 2) it's rushed, the fact that the character is, y’know, fucking immortal kinda kills all potential tension in any combat situation that could happen in this story. The fact that they regard their unusual sudden knowledge of how to do things and then completely toss it to the window due to “fuck it. I got powers. Don't need to know how I know how to use them.” Just really irritated me for some odd reason.
But of course, to each their own. I don't hate the story, just not interested in it due to some of the reasons stated above. Also the fact that they didn't wait long for a crossover. You need time to set up the world properly, before you crossover.
Actually there's a whole list of things I could point out that offsets me from continuing this story. But this comment is long enough, so I will end it here.
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Actually, if you don't mind, could you send me a PM with what all you don't like about it? I'm trying to improve my writing and I can't do that without feedback, especially constructive criticism. Thanks for giving it a shot.
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And THIS is why Rainbow shouldn't mess with time ...
https://m.That would be a hilarious omake...