Equestria is not the land of sunshine and rainbows behind the scenes, and it may take an immortal angel from another world to unveil the truth. An Angel Beats displaced fic
8186605 I was not warned. I was unprepared for the horrors. What I witnessed cannot be unseen. It haunts me, dogging my steps and cursing the shadows to twist and distort, causing them to writhe and undulate back and forth. The sounds echo through the wind, cycling over and over and driving me to insanity. Yet even there I am not safe, for 'tis the broken mind which hath created the horrors which so haunt me, and they thrive in the twisting chaos of my shattered mind. Verily, there is no escape to be had from the tortures and horrors that...
I think, that was a good way to be dramatic... holy crap... I've never felt a chill go up my spine like that since I read the current English version or Edgar Allan Poe's 'The Raven'. Jesus...
Realy? Every time that a story were a human gous to equestria there little pussys. Can some one make a story were the human kicks ass? If I didt know any better a would say that all the autors of fimfiction ar pussys in real life. The point is can somone makes a story with a human that is not a little pussy! please!
8187354 Dude, she just got there. Give it time. By the half-way point, she's going to be leading armies and wreaking dragons. For goodness sake, she's currently a teenage girl who's probably never even been in a slap-fight before. Give the main character time to grow.
8188171 Do bear in mind just who, or rather what, it was that accused Tia of tyranny. There are two sides to every story.
But to be frank, FAUST, NO! I hate needlessly tyrannical Celestia! Some stories make it work, but I don't think I could put my heart into that. Severely flawed Tia? Goodness, yes. Evil Tia? Heck no!
I look forward to further comments, though. Thanks for giving this story a chance!
I have seen griffin the griffin and I love it but that is only one! There should be more storys like that. Also who ever didnt like my last coment can fuck off. I like storys wiht strong humans so what? Is not my falt that everyone likes to make human look weak
8190048 I personally haven't loved a ton of HiE stories. The ones I have are either crossovers (Metroid: Equis) or powerful Displaced (The Mighty Warrior of Epicness, Gravity of the Situation). I can see how the "weak human" thing could be annoying, though. Rest assured, Angel will be developing rather quickly once the story starts earning its "Adventure" tag.
So, Griffin the Griffin. I've seen it around, but haven't had the opportunity to read it. What's it about?
I'll make it short. Griffin the griffin is about of a lot of humans that were taken to equestria by gods as ther Champions. There the humans will be turn to different species then they start ther New life. Griffin the griffin is about a guy that was turn to a griffin and stars a war. What war? You have to reed in order to know. Or you can look for it in YouTube ther you can hear the whole story
Cue the obligatory theme song:
And FIRST! And Fave!
8185041 YES!!!
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...How does one accidentally end up on one of... *shivers* those websites?
8186247 You'd be surprised. My first exposure to that was from clicking a random link. I've never hit the X button more quickly.
Which was annoying since I had other tabs up as well.
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The only way I even know I'm looking at the link is if I ACTUALLY look it up...
If there is a random link... or a pop-up ad... I always avoid it. Always have always will.
8186307 I was young and foolish. And Twilight has no idea what she's doing.
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Oh so very true, about Twilight.
And about you, I guess I was just raised differently or something.
8186605 I was not warned. I was unprepared for the horrors. What I witnessed cannot be unseen. It haunts me, dogging my steps and cursing the shadows to twist and distort, causing them to writhe and undulate back and forth. The sounds echo through the wind, cycling over and over and driving me to insanity. Yet even there I am not safe, for 'tis the broken mind which hath created the horrors which so haunt me, and they thrive in the twisting chaos of my shattered mind. Verily, there is no escape to be had from the tortures and horrors that...
Too dramatic, or should I continue?
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I think...
I think, that was a good way to be dramatic... holy crap... I've never felt a chill go up my spine like that since I read the current English version or Edgar Allan Poe's 'The Raven'. Jesus...
8186948 Ah, The Raven. Love that poem. Memorized it years ago. I'm honored by the comparison.
Realy? Every time that a story were a human gous to equestria there little pussys. Can some one make a story were the human kicks ass? If I didt know any better a would say that all the autors of fimfiction ar pussys in real life. The point is can somone makes a story with a human that is not a little pussy! please!
8187354 Dude, she just got there. Give it time. By the half-way point, she's going to be leading armies and wreaking dragons. For goodness sake, she's currently a teenage girl who's probably never even been in a slap-fight before. Give the main character time to grow.
8188171 Do bear in mind just who, or rather what, it was that accused Tia of tyranny. There are two sides to every story.
But to be frank, FAUST, NO! I hate needlessly tyrannical Celestia! Some stories make it work, but I don't think I could put my heart into that. Severely flawed Tia? Goodness, yes. Evil Tia? Heck no!
I look forward to further comments, though. Thanks for giving this story a chance!
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You should check out griffin the griffin
I have seen griffin the griffin and I love it but that is only one! There should be more storys like that. Also who ever didnt like my last coment can fuck off. I like storys wiht strong humans so what? Is not my falt that everyone likes to make human look weak
8190048 I personally haven't loved a ton of HiE stories. The ones I have are either crossovers (Metroid: Equis) or powerful Displaced (The Mighty Warrior of Epicness, Gravity of the Situation). I can see how the "weak human" thing could be annoying, though. Rest assured, Angel will be developing rather quickly once the story starts earning its "Adventure" tag.
So, Griffin the Griffin. I've seen it around, but haven't had the opportunity to read it. What's it about?
I'll make it short. Griffin the griffin is about of a lot of humans that were taken to equestria by gods as ther Champions. There the humans will be turn to different species then they start ther New life. Griffin the griffin is about a guy that was turn to a griffin and stars a war. What war? You have to reed in order to know. Or you can look for it in YouTube ther you can hear the whole story
Not undyne/10
BWAAAAHAAHAAHAHAAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHHAHHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHHAHAHAAAAA!!!!!!!
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Hehe...This will make things interesting when Twilight meets Sunset...
Sunset:"Who could possibly need this much whip cream?"
Twilight:"Guh!" +twi-blush+
Whip Cream+ Kitchen Table+ shipping =
"Enough you commenting perv!"