Equestria is not the land of sunshine and rainbows behind the scenes, and it may take an immortal angel from another world to unveil the truth. An Angel Beats displaced fic
Feh, should have ditched town as soon as the Tyrant's student moved in.
Sigh. This is another fanfic where Celestia's the 'evil tyrant ruler of Equestria' isn't it? And I bet Luna's the heroic rebellious leader.
Sorry, not trying to shit on your story. I'm just tired of reading fics where Celestia's evil and Luna's Miss Goody two-Shoes. Here's the good part of my comment. The displacement is somewhat unique in that it doesn't automatically happen as in most cases. The character is somewhat introduced with a tiny bit of her personality shown thus far. I look forward to continuing reading!
Comment posted by Endlessshadow deleted May 30th, 2017
8188171 Listen, thats a changeling! They are going to think Tia is a tyrant, cuz ponies thought changelings were evil cuz they need love to survive and booted them out. Thus, the hate.
It was a laptop, and a rather nice one at that. Even an old man stuck in the days of floppy disks and gray-scale television could have seen that this was a rather impressive piece of technology. Sleek, thin, and with a battery that was advertised to last for a week before needing to be recharged, it was a marvel of modern electronics. Angel had been more than happy to pay a meager 2,000 dollars for it at the anime convention. There was just one problem...
10019553 I would change that to $200. It's a way more believable amount of spending money for a college student to have on hand. Plus, it's much closer to what I'd call a "meager amount of money" while still being just large enough that someone might sell a laptop for that amount.
8188171 Old comment I know, but I want to give my take. I feel that it's probably going to be less about Celestia being a evil xenophobe, and more just terrified about the stability of her nation. Based on the description, Equestria is possibly the only stable nations around, and it's understandable she would want to keep outside influences out if that's the case
Police sirens blared in downtown Dallas in the early morning before dawn. Police had set up a barrier surrounding a cheep hotel, allowing no-one in except for the ambulance that arrived on-scene a moment later. Officers swarmed the place, taking statements from everyone there, staff and guests alike.
Love this because I can imagine stuff so it is a great description
Sigh. This is another fanfic where Celestia's the 'evil tyrant ruler of Equestria' isn't it? And I bet Luna's the heroic rebellious leader.
Sorry, not trying to shit on your story. I'm just tired of reading fics where Celestia's evil and Luna's Miss Goody two-Shoes. Here's the good part of my comment. The displacement is somewhat unique in that it doesn't automatically happen as in most cases. The character is somewhat introduced with a tiny bit of her personality shown thus far. I look forward to continuing reading!
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Listen, thats a changeling! They are going to think Tia is a tyrant, cuz ponies thought changelings were evil cuz they need love to survive and booted them out. Thus, the hate.
Wtf? Was this written in 2005?
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I pulled out a random number. Meh.
10019553
I would change that to $200. It's a way more believable amount of spending money for a college student to have on hand. Plus, it's much closer to what I'd call a "meager amount of money" while still being just large enough that someone might sell a laptop for that amount.
8188171
Old comment I know, but I want to give my take. I feel that it's probably going to be less about Celestia being a evil xenophobe, and more just terrified about the stability of her nation. Based on the description, Equestria is possibly the only stable nations around, and it's understandable she would want to keep outside influences out if that's the case
Love this because I can imagine stuff so it is a great description