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Gray Compass


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[Warning, this story contains bondage, possible futa, and sex changing potions]

Possible futa? As the author, shouldn't you know whether or not futa is in your story? :twilightblush:

7011300 Having a permanent penis between your legs is relative.

Actually, the whole universe is relative.

Futa or not Futa. There's the question.

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This exchange of words happened today. It was a real thing.

7011345 What? I'm dumb, please clarify the joke

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Having a permanent penis between your legs is relative.
Actually, the whole universe is relative.
Futa or not Futa. There's the question.

I just really wasn't expecting to read those words today is all.

...maybe "Temporary futa" would a better tag/trigger warning... that is, if the thing ever goes away (it isn't explicitly mentioned)?

Noticed a few derps, but was an enjoyable read nonetheless.

So, is Fluttershy's new appendage a permanent thing? If not, then she should make sure to have more of that potion and should share with Rainbow Dash.

Do we really want to know what Flutters intends to do with bears?

Why is it nearly everyone who writes mature clop involving Flutters makes her a dominatrix?

Nothing personal, I just like mature FlutterDash fics that are sweet and romantic more than just plain clop.

That said, this was an interesting and well-written story, although you did forget to capitalize 'Dash' at one point.

Need more bondage. :pinkiecrazy:

7011398 There's a reddit called "Even with context"

https://www.reddit.com/r/evenwithcontext

It's a fantastic place to find things like these. You will be surprised. :rainbowlaugh:

7011418 We won't. It's in our blood.

7011427 My writting has a lot of derps. Sorry for that.

But I agree with the 'Temporary Futa'. As a potion, I don't think it will be permanent. Will be changing the description thanks to you!

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Firstly - Thank you for reading. :ajsmug:

Holy Shit! I did that? :rainbowlaugh:

You did forget to capitalize 'Dash' at one point.

That's weird, I seldom read shipping stories, so I have no idea what other writers do with their characters.

Why is it nearly everyone who writes mature clop involving Flutters makes her a dominatrix?

Buckets... Buckets of bear milk.

Do we really want to know what Flutters intends to do with bears?

Nah, it's just a temporary potion... I guess,

So, is Fluttershy's new appendage a permanent thing? If not, then she should make sure to have more of that potion and should share with Rainbow Dash.

7011466 Maybe some ship rope ladders... hmmmm

7011300 The only way I could see something as 'possible futa' is if a mare grew one of those sex tentacles. I mean even if it does something like ejaculate, does it still count as a penis?

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Why is it nearly everyone who writes mature clop involving Flutters makes her a dominatrix?

It's the quiet ones you have to be wary of.

7011560 The old shadow thing -

"Everyone carries a shadow," Jung wrote, "and the less it is embodied in the individual's conscious life, the blacker and denser it is."

In Fluttershy's case, the shadow reveals itself as a dominatrix.

7011432
Agreed. Sweet romantic maturity is best maturity.




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If there was potential for bear milk, why was I not told about it?:raritydespair:

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Yeah, with this line:

Rainbow dash basked in the sight, feeling her own cunt starting to leak a drip.

Well, like I said, hopefully, Fluttershy has more of that potion and will be willing to share with Rainbow.

7011723 Who told you it would be literal milk? :pinkiecrazy:

7011833 Alright, alright. Now it's capitalized. :flutterrage:

And yeah, who knows if Rainbow would be willing to try in the future?

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Sorry to bug you. :twilightsheepish:

7012022 Nah, not bugging at all. :ajsmug:

7011300 There's a new story for you, Abyss: Quantum Futa - a Superposition of States. :pinkiecrazy:

Oh geez, that last line... :rainbowderp: :yay:

7012561 Let's rename this comment section - The Abyss appreciation thread.

That was one of the best stories I have read so far for this day. You sir have brightened up my day

7012597 That's amazing to hear! Thank you.

Stay tuned for more stories, I'm practically publishing a new one every day. :twistnerd:

“Yay” Fluttershy squealed. “Just wait until I bring the bears!”

...
Here's hoping she ties Rainbow down for that one.

I really like the story, but..
The part where Dash is the dom is fine, but after the tables turn the story seems a bit off.
Also I think Fluttershy should have teased/tortured Rainbow more. I mean it's a revenge after all.
Still a good story, mainly because it has bondage.

7012890 She's so cute and innocent...

Surely she thought Rainbow would share the same passion for bears. :rainbowlaugh:

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Also I think Fluttershy should have teased/tortured Rainbow more

Yeah, you have a point there.

Thank you for reading tho.

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Why is it nearly everyone who writes mature clop involving Flutters makes her a dominatrix?

I'll be changing that trend pretty soon~

BADASSITUDE!!!! MEEDLYMEEDLYMEEDLYMOOWW!!! *GASP* YOU MUST WRITE A SEQUEL!!!

7013653 Writing more stories right now. Not necessarily bondage (this time) but will do in the future.

Feel free to follow me to get some updates! I don't bite. :pinkiecrazy:

7013509 Np. Bondage is my thing so I'd read any story involving it. :twilightblush:

7013804 Stay tuned then! Because I'll be releasing more of those stories soon. :ajsmug:

7013974 a fic I'm writing. Won't self promote, just gonna say to keep an eye out~

Nice premise, but needs some work mechanically.

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You don't bite? But isn't that what we come here for?

7014585 What sort of 'work mechanically?'

7014624 I can if you want...

7014685 Stoic5

You're welcome. :ajsmug:

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Spelling, punctuation, flow and the like.

7014895 Yeah, that sucks. Not a native speaker here, and not willing to get an editor as well.

"Shut up and take it...um...if you don't mind."

Fluttershy, just YOU wait until I bring the LIKES!

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