and then they were fried to death by a bolt of lightning from above them, cause there could be no way they would see the gryphon half a mile above taking aim and blasting them with a thunderhead.
7054355 i have no idea but so far we havent seen them doing it and in the chapter it is even said that they killed all griffons even those that ran away in cowardice
7055118 kabalo ko ug english, pero kabalo mo ug tagalog? Hindi? Oh, mo una ang bad grammar sa akoang story. Murag understanding ko pero daghan mag maga criticize diri. First time nag write ko, so murag expectations sa mag positive hindi negative reviews
All the positive reviews were from the person who wrote it.
Really?
7053295 Dude go hate somewhere else
Can you do a chapter were the mane six goes with wolfpack squad on a mission?
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I wasn't hating. I'm just saying, this story got a high rage rating, to I don't believe in these reviews.
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P.S. Not a good idea to spam comments.
7053464 Umm, havent thought of that, maybe I might
and then they were fried to death by a bolt of lightning from above them, cause there could be no way they would see the gryphon half a mile above taking aim and blasting them with a thunderhead.
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Dude, try rewriting the story. Make Kessler more likable, fix some grammar, and remove some random crap.
Ch12 has been unpublished. Either the chapter needs to be removed, or you need to change your story's rating to Mature before re-publishing it.
7053763 griffons cant control the weather
7054264 ....... and why would they be unable to use weather magic, when they can walk on cloudsand likely have the same ponies are pegasi?
7054355 i have no idea but so far we havent seen them doing it and in the chapter it is even said that they killed all griffons even those that ran away in cowardice
7054365 wait, as far as I know. Griffons don't control the weather, can they?
So edgy. Bad grammar, pacing, and characterization. Let's not forget the tired human superiority circlejerk either.
7054936 kabalo mo ug tagalog ug bisaya bai?
7055013 Did you suddenly forget English? You know I can see your previous comments, right?
7055118 kabalo ko ug english, pero kabalo mo ug tagalog? Hindi? Oh, mo una ang bad grammar sa akoang story. Murag understanding ko pero daghan mag maga criticize diri. First time nag write ko, so murag expectations sa mag positive hindi negative reviews
7055185 dili ko pure english, half man ko. Ikaw kasabot mo? Dili, murag bugo ang tao diri
7054928 they cant as long as we havent seen them doing it but i dont think they can in the first place
7055960 ok
When is the next chapter coming out?