I approve of the slaughter against the foul rapist, although it was a factor I could've been fine without... I was already wishing their deaths before the whole rape, so it just left a bad taste in my mouth... Unless you were trying to us it as a set up for some interesting character development for my second favorite Princess, and (by extension) my favorite Princess, then I fail to see why what necessitated her rape. You could have had other excuses to write clop, if that was your angle, we already hated them enough for permanent Karmic Justice, and I can't accept "because reasons". The only reasons that should ever happen in a story, is as a premise for an important character event (which you better hope to execute properly)... So, I really hope you can redeem this piece from that volatile powder keg you placed in your story...
Sadly, the author hasn't come back for a long time. So I guess this story is sadly canceled.
And it really sucks, because this story is only one of the few Wolfenstein crossovers in here that is actually good. ( Except, the unnecessarily rape of course )
I approve of the slaughter against the foul rapist, although it was a factor I could've been fine without... I was already wishing their deaths before the whole rape, so it just left a bad taste in my mouth... Unless you were trying to us it as a set up for some interesting character development for my second favorite Princess, and (by extension) my favorite Princess, then I fail to see why what necessitated her rape. You could have had other excuses to write clop, if that was your angle, we already hated them enough for permanent Karmic Justice, and I can't accept "because reasons". The only reasons that should ever happen in a story, is as a premise for an important character event (which you better hope to execute properly)... So, I really hope you can redeem this piece from that volatile powder keg you placed in your story...
Nice cliffhanger cant wait for the next one
7042321 Equestria.....almost all the Captains(excluding Shining Armour). But they shall become better when Kessler shall train them.
7042039 Deathshed was a pain in the ass
7041817 I just wanted Kessler to slaughter every godamn law breaker
7043049 I was complaining about the rape, not the glorious showers of gore and bone fragments...
Was not clop that was rape
What the heck did you do WITH MY TWILIGHT YOU *******!!!
The rape was highly NOT necessarily.
Those traitorous kidnappers are going to die anyway, so why the hell did you do that messed up crap to poor Twilight like that!!??
7041817
Full-heartedly agreed.
Sadly, the author hasn't come back for a long time. So I guess this story is sadly canceled.
And it really sucks, because this story is only one of the few Wolfenstein crossovers in here that is actually good. ( Except, the unnecessarily rape of course )