Original username Zoddtheimmortalone. I'm a fan of anime, but I enjoy the classics more. As for My Little Pony, I may not watch it as much, but I do like the show and I also love EG
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One guess what this is about.
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And that is?
6987481 It's obviously about how Button's mom and the protagonist get on T.V with Larry King! Asking them all about their life as totally platonic friends, and nothing more.
Well you're a tease.
The concept is good, but you keep switching the point of view throughout this first chapter. I can help you edit a bit if you would like.
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Huh? It's all from Jared's point of view.
Button's mom has got it going on, shes all i want and I've waited for so long
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6987731 But in all seriousness I like what I see here. I can't wait for more.
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I'm glad you like it
This was great Zodd, you really should have been making romantic/clop fics sooner. As for the fic itself, i'd say you did a good intro and im intrested to see where this goes.
If i have one constructive criticism to say though...it's that button's mom's name may most likely be Joy Lovetap. On account of her cutie mark being a bottle and a heart, which has many fans have her special talent be something like caring for foals in a newborn ward, or a day care.
However this is STILL your story and you can write her however you want, I was just offering some insight I hope you find helpful.
Great job as always and can't wait for more.
have a fave and a thumbs up on me!
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Thank you very much, friend
Also, I hear her name is either Elaina or Milano
6987936 I see, That's the thing with almost exclusively fan made characters, they don't or may not have one exact name
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Oh okay
._. Uhhhh. WAT?!
A milf story? Featuring Button's Mom?
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Amazing
6987532 Sorry bro, my scribe was posting from my account.
I like the story and the only thing I found is at the very end.
It should be lay instead of lied.
I look forward to seeing more of this story.
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I've been a fan of her for a while now and I wanted to do a clopfic of her.
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The larvae like new born from Aliens doing the Macarena to the song 'Mambo Number 5' that is my guess.
Ohhh i like this
You seem to nail buttons milf mom quite nice
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Thanks. Chapter 2 will come out soon as possible
6987668 https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=lGIEmH3BoyAhere you go
Arrgh! Much like! Want moar! Soon....?
A Button's Mom story? And...and it's clop?
I'm going to assume Jared, Button, and the girls are 18+, right? Clearly Jared's showing behaviors of a curious adolescent.
Edit: Nevermind, just read in the description he's 22. Kind of odd of him to show those signs at that age, though. Eh, I guess everyone goes through puberty differently.
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did you not read the story description?
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bring on the next chapter
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They are all over the place here. This is gonna weird Button the hell out when he hears rumors of the lovey-dovey dare that his bro just had with his mom.
it will~
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Dame you Dio!
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Too fast, too fast.
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We're just getting warmed up, aren't we?"
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Yep
Cover. Art. Link. Now.
An I know it from somewhere!!
Ummmm, I'm still kind of scared.
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Is it because of the sex that's coming soon?
6994577 no, thats... my name. I dont have a problem about it though.
D'awww. What a sweet day. Hopefully Button won't walk in on them later when they are getting 'busy'. There is no way that conversation can end well.
looking at the cover art at first, I thought she was wearing a Vault Jumpsuit. that is all.
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He's out of Ponyville and is with Sweetie Belle for the entire week
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True, but what about after? In the heat of their passion, they might be a tiny bit forgetful. Love and lust do tend to mess with the mind. That little detail of his inevitable return might be omitted, and who knows what Button could stumble upon when he comes back.
Hmm... I'm just not feeling it here. It's like there isn't enough history between the two for me to know whether or not their feelings are legit.
Plus, I'm not a believer in "love at first sight," so take this as you will, but I just think it's the high attractions they have for each other (maybe lust) that's taking part of their intentions of getting together than love here. I'm not sure how long this story will go, but I just don't know enougb about them to consider them as 3 dimensional characters.
DIIIIIIIIOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!