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Black Hailstorm


A never-ending storm of ideas

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This story is a sequel to It All Comes Down To This


Starlight Glimmer will never forget the day she was forgiven. Not a day goes by when she doesn't remember what she did. Living in the Little Town, where she stripped ponies of their cutie marks for her own philosophy is something she constantly remembers. And though the ponies of her town have accepted her and are once again slowly getting along with her, there is always that feeling of guilt she feels.

The same can be said when she visits Twilight and the others at Ponyville. Not a day goes by where Twilight Sparkle smiles and welcomes her with open hooves. And Spike always so kind and accepting when she appears. But deep down Starlight can't help but feel guilty, doubtful, confused, and scared.

After everything she'd done. Seeing those worlds, seeing what her philosophy could do, knowing that other ponies were suffering after she had created multiple timelines, how could she go on with all that knowledge. How could she deal with the guilt?

A certain alicorn pops in for a visit, possibly holding the answer.

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Comments ( 9 )

Do you have a story machine gun or something? Because you pump out high quality stories at a ungodly rate.

Oh well. Time to read.

great one shot ! it was TRULY HEART BREAKING AND AT THE SAME TIME HEART WARMING<watching STARLIGHT AND LUNA INTER ACTING! well done on a fine story!

6956504 Thanks I appreciate it greatly and glad you enjoyed my one shot.


6956412 Thanks I try. I suppose it is due to my amazing imagination that you can thank for these high quality stories. Hope you enjoy this one shot as well.

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Well jeeze, aren't you quite the humble one. :ajbemused:

Also, there was a decent amount of grammatical errors throughout the story. You might want to go through and fix them or get an editor to do it.

I have a gripe. Starlight said she knew who Nightmare Moon was, yet she had no idea who restored her to Luna? Also, Starlight only saw one timeline. How did she know about the others?

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This story is more of in relation to a previous story I had relating to Starlight, Twilight and Spike. It's not a sequel yet at the same time it has some elements relating to that story in it.

Is or will there be a sequel to show what Pinkie has planned?

7526779 Most likely not, I think I'm done with stories relating to Starlight's guilt for now.

This is a pretty good story, but I’d suggest getting an editor to go through it.

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