With the defeat of the Dazzlings Spike and Twilight ready themselves to return to Equestria. However, as Spike steps in something goes wrong and he is shoved into a different world altogether. He journeys for home even with hope long since dead.
Hmm, it seems to me, like things are finally settling in for Sunset. That's good, but she's still wet behind the ears, in this crazy world of theirs. That said, I believe that Spike will be doing his utmost to keep her safe.
How much he can do that, when she's kind of fucked up already by this point, is something we're going to have to see. With that in mind, I wonder if we'll be seeing the return o She-demon Sunset. She seems like she would fit in thi setting.
7553298 I mean, it only makes sense, right? The Magic Macguffin, that is the Element of Magic, seems to alter people/ponies, based on their innate nature.
Sunset at the time, wasn't being very "sunny", so things went down south for her. I wouldn't be surprised, if there was an item that could bring her back to that state, seeing as they're in a world of discord, paradox and chaos.
The only problem I have with this story is your depiction of this culture and yet failing a key implementation of it.
From Spike I can almost believe it since he grew up being a servant to Twilight but from Bix it doesn't make sense.
The culture you're depicting would not put up with the kind of bitchy attitude that Sunset is displaying. From the constant threats the kicking and slapping ect. In that kind of culture a woman like that would be, in no uncertain terms, physically and verbally put in her place for acting like a child.
You sort of do it in a half-hearted manner but not even close to the extent that such a culture would diplay.
Hmm, it seems to me, like things are finally settling in for Sunset. That's good, but she's still wet behind the ears, in this crazy world of theirs. That said, I believe that Spike will be doing his utmost to keep her safe.
How much he can do that, when she's kind of fucked up already by this point, is something we're going to have to see. With that in mind, I wonder if we'll be seeing the return o She-demon Sunset. She seems like she would fit in thi setting.
Nice story, m8. I think the God said it better tho...
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Demon Sunset huh? There's a thought.
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Thank you. Glad you like it.
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I mean, it only makes sense, right? The Magic Macguffin, that is the Element of Magic, seems to alter people/ponies, based on their innate nature.
Sunset at the time, wasn't being very "sunny", so things went down south for her. I wouldn't be surprised, if there was an item that could bring her back to that state, seeing as they're in a world of discord, paradox and chaos.
The only problem I have with this story is your depiction of this culture and yet failing a key implementation of it.
From Spike I can almost believe it since he grew up being a servant to Twilight but from Bix it doesn't make sense.
The culture you're depicting would not put up with the kind of bitchy attitude that Sunset is displaying. From the constant threats the kicking and slapping ect. In that kind of culture a woman like that would be, in no uncertain terms, physically and verbally put in her place for acting like a child.
You sort of do it in a half-hearted manner but not even close to the extent that such a culture would diplay.