LunaDash

by Rainbow_Dash_4_real

The Jerk

It was the middle of the night and Luna was bored out of her mind. With no servant to mentally scar. She had nothing to do. She decided to check on her mischievous pegasus friend.

As she walked down the hallway she could hear muffled moans and groans. Luna slowly walked towards the noises. Luna had thought they had been coming from Dash's room. But instead the room across from. "How strange..." Luna whispered.

She used her magic to shrink herself down so she could go under the door. "Oh...Luna...faster...faster." Dash said in between moans. Luna walked under the door and observed her surroundings. It was a room with a red heart shaped bed. The carpet was black. Luna saw a rainbow tail. She used her tiny alicorn wings to fly up the bed. But what she saw made her blush. But she couldn't really explain it.

Luna then grew herself to her original size and asked, "What are you doing?" Dash plopped her flank on the bed and his her plaything under the pillow and exchanged it with a book.

"Nothin'," she said calmly, "But what are doing in here?" Luna panicked she couldn't thing about a lie. After all she used to be the bearer of element of honesty along with loyalty and laughter.

"I-I was checking out all the rooms in the house...I guess." Luna cracked a fake grin at the pegasus.

"You wanna a know what I think you were doing?" Dash pulled Luna onto the large lover's bed.

Luna shook her head and said, "No thank you." Luna smiled.

"I think you were being a spy..." Dash leaned in.

"I was not!" Luna protested pushing Rainbow Dash off of her.

"Then what were you doing your highness."

Luna blushed "I-I was I was...um." Dash leaned in to kiss the adorable alicorn. Luna felt confused, but excited. Luna turned to the side letting Rainbow kiss her check.

The doorbell rang. Luna got up from the bed. "Let me get it." Dash said getting up from the bed. She couldn't believe she just kissed the princess of the night. She was nervous about what Luna was thinking. I can't believe I just did that, "Luna must hate me." Dash groaned before she opened the door.

"Hey girl..." Dash looked at the pony at the door. It was Dumbbell.

"What are you doing here?"

Luna stuck her head out from behind Dash. "Oh its him.." Luna walked into the kitchen.

"Dash I just wanted to apologize, for what I did."

"Oh, come inside." Dash said with a smirk on her face. Luna glared at the stallion as he walked inside. It wasn't a kind glare, it was a dead cold glare. Like she wanted to kill him.

Dumbbell sat on the couch. "Dash I wanted to talk about well the foal that my lawyers told me about."

Dash plopped on the couch, "What about it? It's your foal your sp-"

"Hey! No one wants to hear that while they're eating!" Luna complained.

"Sorry..." Dash rumbled.

"Well I was wondering why you were suing me, if it is our foal."

Dash narrowed her eyes, "Because you raped me! You asshole!" Dash yelled on the top of her lungs.

Dumbbell flinched at her. "Bae, I'm sorry. I didn't mean to."

Dash eyes literaly turned red. Her coat was turning pale. "I AM NOT YOUR BAE! AND WHAT DO YOU MEAN YOU DIDN'T MEAN TO?!?"

Luna looked up from her dinner plate. Dash's coat was white and her mane was starting to spike up. Luna ran to the now white pegasus. "Dashie please calm down. He didn't mean it." Luna said standing in front of the stallion spreading her wings to block him.

"He meant it! Just like you meant to bring eturnal night!" Luna felt hurt by what her dear friend had just said.

"Dashie, please don't do this. Please! And if you do you have to go through me!" Luna said bravely starring her friend dead in the eye.

Dash's coat started to return to it's natural color, her mane started to lay down. She laid on the ground. "Sorry..." she mumbled.

"Dumbbell can you leave us. You can come back in the morning."

"Ok girl. I owe you one." He said kissing her on the cheek. Dumbbell flew out the door.

"You know he's just a jerk, right."

Dash smiled, "I know."

Comments

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7311685 It's a world of colorful ponies...how realistic can it get? Plus I wrote these chapters in 2014 when I was still a beginner. There are a bunch of mistakes, I'm just copying and pasting from Wattpad were it's already posted.

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7311684 Thank you.

[Treue75]

"Hey! No one wants to hear that while they're eating!" Luna complained.

When did they start eating?

[MiketheTexan]

7311701
You're writing about rape, unintended pregnancy, and general romantic encounters. I think that's pretty real, colorful ponies or not.

[Treue75]

7311701 How about editing and correcting mistakes instead of just copying?

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7311745 Luna was doing her own thing while I was focusing on Rainbow Dash, while Dashie went for the door Luna headed towards the kitchen it says that.

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7311761 Because that's not my focus right now.

[Treue75]

7311800 True. Luna went to the kitchen. But aside from that there were no further indications, implications or else that Luna made food and brought Rainbow something as well.

I was simply confused and re-read the scene three times, in case I missed something.
I'm not sure about others but I'm not very fond of re-reading because of uncertainties or inconsistencies.

[Treue75]

7311803 too bad

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7312557 honestly you are just being a d*ck that was rude and uncalled for.

[HHHGREGG]

7311757 fuck texas

[HHHGREGG]

Thats how it ends!?! He comes back and dash is all like "its cool bro imma just have your rape induced child in nine months" like what the frick

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7434744 Although I get what you are saying but I'm from Texas

[Rainbow_Dash_4_real]

7434755 There is more I just haven't updated because not a lot of people like it.

[ShadowblazeCR]

I think Fimfiction is trying to tell you something based on the fact that you've got more stories than you do followers.

[AC97]

7436357 LOL.