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Workard


I will no longer be writing Fimfictions, nor will I continue the unfinished ones. I do apologize. However, my stories will remain on this site.

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Um what the buck was that? honestly why would pinkie's friends immediately jump to the conclusion that she killed Dashie when it was quite obvious Pinkie was telling the truth about the creature doing it. i hate stories like this where the mane six turn into douchebags who turn against pinkie and accuse her of being a killer when she isnt.:facehoof:

great story but by the way, its the everfree forest not evergreen

*Spoiler comment* (PinkieDashTwi) Well. First of all Twilight confirmed that Pinkie had killed 2 Drutaa's which is a crime in itself. And what goes for Rainbow Dash; Pinkie had hid her body in a locked chest in her room. I would be pretty convinced that the person hiding the body would also be the one who commited the crime. And read the other chapters as well. The mane six aren't all that 'douchey'. But what I am saying is that Twilight found the body and panicked. She told Spike about it which made him contact princess Celestia. And if this was real life, Pinkie would have been accused guilty without a doubt. Also as you read Twilight is doubting the sitaution herself. I personally don't think that any of them are douchebags, they just misunderstood the situation. Thanks for the feedback though.

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Oh! sorry about that i had to read it again so yeah i can see how a misunderstanding like that can happen sorry about that comment its a good story:twilightoops:

dude..... stop.... this is too much

I'm afraid of your mind. keep going

wait a min..... pink, purple, glow, yellow, orange... I think I know who the next chapter is about.

CALLED IT! I knew Dashie wasn't really dead. I know who she visits next too.

Really Nice Story... Love that kind :moustache::pinkiehappy:

You Wrote : '' a mare liking another mare isn't easy '' :twilightblush:
But I've understood '' a mare licking another mare isn't easy'' :rainbowlaugh: :rainbowlaugh:
A bit different don't you think?

Whaoo.. This Chapter sure is Awesome :raritystarry:

*cmaps hooves* beautiful. Simply beautiful

Wait... if smashing the elements killed the bearers then why didn't they die when nightmare moon smashed the elements?

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Because the elements were not really "activated" at that time, since they never had used them before.
But I know what you mean. Thanks for reading.

Fuck you i have tears streaming down my face now

Well the end was a bit of a dissapointment i wonder what kind of demise green leafe met

3842458 Yeah, but at the end Dash broke the Elements, in doing so she killed all the elements, including herself

Wow just wow rarities chapter was the saddest

I've read this story like 4 times. I LOOOVVEEE IIITT!!!!!!!!! :pinkiesad2: it makes me so sad tho :( i cry every time :fluttercry:

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