Nowhere to hide, chased by a friend. The only thing that can save her is right infront of her, but will she be able to reach it in time? Can she restore her mistakes before her punishment arrives?
This may seem like a cut out of a longer story, and somehow, it is. I had this idea for a story for a long time, but I never got around to write it. I've always been a fan of weird and dramatic Fimfics so this was enjoyable to write.
Please don't bash on me because it seems unfinished. I actually think that it adds a nice touch to it all.
How did it all come to this?
Chapters (1)
What...happened exactly? I'm a little confused.
i am kindda confused
Unlike the two others I'm not confused at all,
Your story is awesome !!!
Next chapter
I like it BUT I MISS TOO MUCH
I am confused and maybe you said you din,t make it a full story to make it more
IT IS FUCKED UP
You can't make anything out of it
If you only would say who the pony was it was enough to cover it
Or just say the pony was a perent,princess or a friend it was enough
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I like stories that leaves you with questions, if it's well written. I may consider to write the full story, but that would not be in the near future. As for now, this is the story, this is the end.
The picture for whatever reason reminds me of Drag me to Hell.... This will be downloaded....
The way I see it, the flames were a test that Princess Celestia was giving to Twilight Sparkle, and Twilight passed by being unwilling to just lay down and die. I don't think Twilight was ever in any real danger. I think the familiar pony at the end was Princess Celestia.