• Published 22nd Mar 2016
  • 5,099 Views, 31 Comments

Those heated moments! - Lazydrill



( 2nd pov, colt ) A story with chapters where you and mentioned characters spend some loving time together.

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Comments ( 3 )

Good story. Some grammatical errors, but overall not enough to be too distracting.

However

The fire cackled gently

This made me laugh - er - cackle.

7833067 Cheers bud! Grammar is being a bad girl again.:facehoof:

I thought already that that sentence read a bit odd... should have searched the word first.:scootangel:

A good 2017!

V8

7833271
Jesus im late!

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