Look to the Past

A long time ago, the world was very different. But yet, no matter what, some things never change and love is one of them. Join Snarling Fang and Tough Love and their journey together as they discovered what fate has in store for them and their future foals.

A prequel to a series of stories I am planning to write, set in an alternate universe.

Teen for blood, a bit of foul language and Nocturne. You will see what I mean when I get to her.

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Chapter One · 1st Feb 2016 · 1,522 words
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Chapter Two · 1st Feb 2016 · 1,401 words
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Chapter Three · 1st Feb 2016 · 2,301 words
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Chapter Four · 23rd Oct 2017 · 2,264 words
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Chapter Five · 24th Oct 2017 · 1,550 words
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Chapter Six · 25th Oct 2017 · 1,831 words
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Chapter Seven · 3rd Nov 2017 · 2,038 words
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Chapter Eight · 23rd Feb 2018 · 1,755 words
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Copper Springs

Copper Springs #1 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter One ·

I like it so far. Though I'm not sure what a flutter pony is. There were a few typos. I only bring that up because in some spots they interrupted the flow of the story.

Evilhumour

Evilhumour #2 · Jan 13th, 2017 · · · Chapter Three ·

7864101 Thank you for enjoying it and I hope I can better explain what a flutter pony is
I will ask my editor for help later on

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Asolem2 #3 · Apr 27th, 2020 · · · Chapter Two ·

Flicking her tufted ear, she heard the orders to fall back into step and moved forward. The sooner she got home, the better. Her life could get back to normal and just maybe she could get promoted to a more honourable squad.

Sorry but not really to tell you this, but I do believe your life is about to get a lot more interesting

I ask you all to search for the one you can call your soulmate and let the lives lost be honoured in the new generation that I know you all will bring to life!”

You know a real pessimist could easily see this as a ploy to replenish the troops she just lost

Shaking her head and forcing her doubts out of her mind, she resolved her will to do what Nocturne asked of her. She was no social pony, true, but how hard could it be to find her special somepony?

Ahhh, to be young and naive

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Asolem2 #4 · Apr 27th, 2020 · · · Chapter Three ·

“Not at all,” Nocturne said, running her tongue over the rim of the mug in such a way that Fang had to bite her lip to keep her mind clean. “Not everypony is suited to such an open manner of searching for their true love - can you believe that I am still searching for my own true love?”

I can, rather easily in fact

“Ah, I know that face,” Nocturne tapped the counter and startled Fang out of her thoughts, a grin on the disguised alicorn’s‘ face. “You are thinking of somepony,” she said in a sing-song voice, her tail swishing in an eager fashion. “Tell me, I wanna know who got your attention.”

Is Nocturne Cadance's ancestor or something?

“Seems like he left quite an impression on you if you could remember him after all this time,” Nocturne purred, staring at her with half lidded eyes. “You should go looking for him.”

I am Nocturne in this scene

Nocturne's a delight

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Asolem2 #5 · Apr 27th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Four ·

Even if she is a very dirty old mare.

She's great

Fang shuddered at living that long, not understanding how anypony could live that long and still be sane.

Making a lot of assumptions there

Snarling Fang is to be given extended leave up to and lasting no more than one year, at which point I shall personally go and aid her should such a situation arise.’”

...I suspect a part of Nocturne almost wants Fang to fail, just so she can get an excuse to do a little traveling and... sightseeing

With a frown, he pushed the scroll up a bit more. “‘P.S. The mountain we discovered was a lovely climb and I wish we had enjoyed it together.’”

This mare is great

Evilhumour

Evilhumour #6 · Apr 28th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Three ·

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Nocturne's a true spirit animal.

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Evilhumour #7 · Apr 28th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Four ·

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Nocturne is truly wonderful

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Asolem2 #8 · Apr 29th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Five ·

All she really had to worry about was finding one pony and talking to him so her alicorn wouldn’t step in.

It would be hilarious if she did though

Those ponies bothered her more than she liked; she clearly knew the power that fear had for those whose faces were hidden, and the wardens of the Neutral Lands covered their entire bodies to promote their supposed neutrality in their duties to the travellers in this mostly lawless land. In truth, they were their own enforcers and there was little to no oversight in their actions.

Yeah that's an organization that will always become corrupt in some way

“And we are doing our best to aid you,” the warden said. “We know that there have been a number of Bat pegasi out in the lands and if it were not for this damnable weather, we would be able to tell you where this one we’ve been following is . ”

Oh no what a shock, a supposedly neutral organization (or at least two or more members of it) is acting very non-neutral, who could have ever seen that coming

Asolem2

Asolem2 #9 · Apr 29th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Six ·

“As you should be,” the warden sneered, bumping into the doctor and knocking him over again. “All you had to do was keep her here.”

Don't you just love "Neutral" organizations

Leaning against her, his soft coat against her chest, he replied, “My name is Tough Love.”

Fitting

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Asolem2 #10 · Apr 30th, 2020 · · · Chapter Seven ·

Fang let out a happy chirp, holding the pillow in her hooves closer to her chest. She couldn’t remember buying this soft and squishy pillow but it was simply the best. She thought it was trying to move away but that was impossible and she just pulled it closer to herself.

With her ears flicking about, Fang pawed the ground and admitted to him, “Actually, you were the first one I have… slept with, in any manner.”
“Me too, Snarling,” Tough said sheepishly. “Me too.”
They both coughed and did their best to look away from each other for some time before Fang managed to get a proper hold of herself.

Adorable

“A few more days,” Tough Love replied. “But definitely less than a week, barring something unexpected happening.”

So it's gonna take more than a week

“Who knows?” Fang finished packing up her things. “I have a bad feeling we’ll find out at some point though. Something tells me that neither he or that mare are the type to give up so easily.”

Probably not no

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Asolem2 #11 · Apr 30th, 2020 · 1 · · Chapter Eight ·

Muttering to himself, Tough’s horn lit up and some things flew out of his own pack. As he examined his equipment, Fang watched in interest until he’d cobbled together something that looked decidedly odd, but as he affixed it to her chest, he nodded. “That should hold it, as long as I keep it charged.”

So she's the Iron Mare now

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