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I've got a fever...and the only cure is more SoarinFire!

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It's a wonder as to why the sky possess such magic to the blue pegasus. When he's depressed, he'd fly, when he feels miserable, he'd fly;when happiness burst from the inside of his heart, he'd fly. When he is but in any mood, he flies. Flying has become inseparable to him for years, and not a single day can he live without feeling the cool breeze. Yet unbeknownst to him, distraction from a certain mare proves even mightier than the heavenly horizon, leaving the happy-go-lucky stallion extremely sappy and vulnerable. What's worse, he's again lost in his own thoughts at the biggest wonderbolt performance in all of Equestria. The young, promising co-captain must deal with this sticky issue right at hoof: It's now or never, make it to the sky or crash & burn. Will he be able to overcome that distraction? Will he recover? Will everything be alright after she finds out his little secret?

Any feedback is welcomed =D

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You don't read fics like these; you decipher them. It's obvious that you were going for a dramatic, emotional style, but the end result is clumsy and sloppily formatted. It makes it really hard to read.

6903002 Yeah, I tried to replicate the style of some great authors on this site yet failed miserably. Everytime I try to take a detailed and emotional approach, stories would turn out like this---messy and cluttered without any focus. Thanks for your feedback anyway, I'm still struggling to improve:derpytongue2: hope I can get better in the future :)

Soarin+Spitfire = best pair :) This ship coming soon canon ^^

7175989 Yeah, can't help but hope Hasbro can make an episode about these two, they're just so adorable together! And that best ship scenario:scootangel: Soarinfire for ever and ever!!

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me too, do you think they will though

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Not likely, as the series is already over. But not a minute goes by without me thinking they deserve a happy ending. They would be a great couple if they end up together (which is very likely).

mhm, wish they showed more of that ship...

They are a great pair, that’s for sure

Will there ever be a second part? It’s been 4 years Oof and now I’m curious

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