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An Apple's Potential

Rarity witnesses something that sparks her fashion sense once Applejack drops her hat. She sees great potential that can be brought out and make Applejack beautiful than she allows herself to let on. Only one problem: Getting the gal on the farm to her boutique. Cover Art not available yet. Cancelled.

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mouch30

mouch30 #1 · Feb 12th, 2016 · 1 · ·

It's refreshing to see the characters acting a bit indifferent to one another. I find it hard to believe that they would all suddenly become friends just because they're the elements, and I'm glad that that's being reflected here. Looking forward to more!

Kimmo Rabies Pronger

Kimmo Rabies Pronger #2 · Feb 12th, 2016 · · ·

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Thing is, it's still a cartoon in the end, like they have to keep it chirpy and bright for the kids but you do have a point. I'm happy you're looking forward to the second chapter!