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Sounds good even aside from the fact that it's part of one of my favourite continuities.
As someone who used to do this on a regular basis with one of my exes, I can say that this is utterly hilarious and incredibly accurate for how it normally goes.
6870398 Oh, man, is it really? That's awesome to hear. It's something I've never done and irrationally get uncomfortable seeing online—I actually wrote this partly to try to get over that uncomfortableness. Because it's really fuckin' irrational.
I don't think it worked, but this was fun to explore anyway. Any thoughts on what was most accurate and most inaccurate about how this went down, in case I want to write some more of this?
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The beginning anxiety was good, you know, not knowing how to start. That's something that comes with practice. No one ever really knows how to start that stuff.
As for everything else, like I said, it's pretty fucking accurate.
6870514 Heh, yeah, Twilight's anxiety there is quite directly just my own being fed right through. Everything she says is something I was thinking.
Glad it worked out! Thanks for the comments!
Very nice
If that's what I can expect from immigration, I'm moving.
That was pretty good.
This was an interesting one. Well written, and and the novel concept was well executed. Oddly enough, it's for that very reason that I didn't actually find it very arousing. It's very much like reading someone's online RP, with all the little real world interruptions detailed for us, but not the thrill of the actual interactivity. It was fun, amusing, and I happily give it a like, buuuut I can't say it "excited" me :/
Ooh, this was really good.
And for the first time, I finally understand sexting.
Wait on, what does she mean she read them all already? Did she hack into human Twilight's... wherever it is she keeps her stories? I wouldn't actually put that past her considering she can apparently send emails and texts from other people's accounts.
6877775 he's playing with the idea that twily, and sci-twi have the same tendencies. That includes writing smut.... And sunset had already read twily's, so when she glanced over sci-twi's, she saw that thei were the same.
6877909 I thought that at first, the phrasing didn't seem quite right for that though. But I guess it works.
I love this continuity for a few reasons (strongly support the concept, it just fits the Mane Six's special bond so well) but most of all is the grasp you have on the characters. I was giddy watching Sunset lose her shit laughing at the journalgasm - your Sunlight interactions are fantastic.
Great work.
That was so hot and perfect and oh my gosh amazing! I loved it!
Please, please tell me that at some point in this series, Spike is going to be getting involved in these weekly get togethers. Let him find out what's going on so Twilight and the others have to explain the matter to him, and wrestle with whether or not to involve him since the cat's out of the bag.
6895639 Never say never, but... probably don't count on it. I want to keep my smut far away from any kids that might exist in the narrative.
If it does happen, it'll probably be because I want to take a serious look at what happens when a small town like Ponyville finds out that six of the ponies they all thought were nice and innocent friends participate in weekly orgies.
Which is probably a terrible idea that will never happen, so, yeah! Probably don't count on it.
6880871 Haha, you took the words right out of my... fingers, I guess.
That was fun to read!
Well done
You have no idea how much I loved this story!
I didn't expect to like it that much, but the cute connections and little jokes Sunset and Twilight had really were cute, also your adorable sense of humor and I loved how you wrote this! You were extremely accurate for a seemingly awkward situation, but made it cute and basically amazing!
Best I've read so far!
I now want to know what the two Twilights have written, it sounds to be most entertaining.
Good story. Just for fun you should do a prologue where Celestia wants to review the journal to see how things are going. Lol don't have her say anything about it but have her correct the Grammer and just proof read the hell out of the story.
I was half expecting them to be wrapping up their 'adventure' when suddenly "Well this is a rather interesting use for the journals I gave you."
I really liked this.
I want to hear about the words they weave