A small peek of Twilight and Sunsets relationship from the point of view of one of their friends (man thats a lot of ofs)
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This fic is mainly a joke on how almost every shipping fic I've read the main relationship always either has no problems at all and everything is peachy OR when they do have a problem its always something massive and the whole group is involved and people cry and all that stuff
Ps i also wrote this in about 2 hours while fueled on determination and alcohol so they're might be a lot of errors........what am i saying the whole things an error
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That was actually pretty funny. I think maybe the drunk thing might have loosened you up a bit. Honestly, this could easily be me and my girl. We fight all the time and some of those fights need to be resolved and some are just us being the prideful, stubborn, hyperanylitical, overly sensitive people we are. And sometimes we fight just because. Your grammer and pacing could use a little work as well as maybe seperateing out the individual voices more but otherwise it was quite enjoyable. Thank you for writing this.
This was pretty funny. Just one thing, the bad grammar kinda took me out of the story. So maybe try to fix that up a bit? Otherwise, pretty good story.
I mean, yeah. That's a relationship.
We argue about stupid shit without really trying to win then turn right around and act like it didn't happen
Grammar aside, it was cute little story.
short and sweet
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Yeah now that im not out of it ill ask someone to help me fix this
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the whole A/C argument is an actual argument ive had
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Thank you very much
An interesting take on the theme of a romantic relationship.
This reminds me of my brother arguing with his girlfriend and then being all cute in just a moment. Great story btw,but the grammar was a bit off putting.
Huh, I guess I know nothing about relationships either. I really liked this one shot, will there be more *wink *wink?!!
Sexual Tension.
Two friends of mine were dating it was exactly like this
This kind of arguements are healthy. Its mostly just fooling around and being comfortable with each other. I love how you portrayed a different POV than normal fanfic. Keep it up!
Aaaaand things just got worse! 😬
Ok, but it still doesn't tie into your situation.
Still wasn't that bad if you ask me.