• Member Since 25th May, 2012
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Someone has just qualified to be a user of Afterlife Prime, a totally immersive synthetic universe accessed while asleep. In this game one can choose to be anyone or anything that their imaginations allow. So our protagonist becomes Fractal Cloudfront the Pegasus. And soon finds that he is not the only pony in this new world.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 14 )

Pure. Awesome! :rainbowkiss: I'll be suprised if this doesn't get featured. But the end perplexes me, what exactly happend? :rainbowhuh:

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You'll see! Thanks for the feedback, I'm glad to know people are enjoying it. Now that I know that I can post it here I should be updating fairly quickly. :pinkiehappy:

Interesting. Sorta reminds me of Ready Player One, except where you aren't required to be human.

Also, I'd like to note that I ignored the part about the "voice" being feminine and read it in the Portal 2 announcer voice. It was highly amusing. :pinkiehappy:

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Heh, I love Portal.

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That is some huge praise, especially so early into the story. I'm glad you are enjoying it so much.

I recommend you check out my roommates fic, which I am editing.

http://www.fimfiction.net/story/33683/Mane-Effect

If you are into Mass Effect.

2nd chapter is even better! :rainbowkiss: best fic I've read honestly :pinkiehappy:

Okay updating; apparently posting this here has un-italisized my italisized stuff. so I will be editing a bunch.

Title Newbie racer... I approve :scootangel:

Great fic! I really like the idea and I can't wait to see how the story will evolve, about the AI "Greeter" and the game world. I may not have so much experience as others, but I find it well written. Kinda weird there are so little views and not more.
Anyway I can't wait to read more!

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Thanks, it means a lot to hear that people are enjoying this.

I've been struggling a little on writing chapter 4, but I have a general plan for where it is going. I think as it gets more updated it will likely get more views.

But remember, in order to get views I either need to trip a tag search, be on the front page, or get recommended. The first won't happen much, the second only happens on update, and on this site only for a short period, and the third depends on readers talking about it.

Speaking of which, "Mane Effect" by Quillery deserves more views and I am editing it. So I suggest you go read it, it is not a straight rip of Mass Effect, and is enjoyable whether or not you are a fan of the series.

Poor Argos, now he'll never get to complete the list :rainbowlaugh:

How does my shitty fic have more views than this? :derpyderp2: anyway awesome as always :rainbowkiss:

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Oh knowing Argos (having played him) he'll find some way. But this story isn't about Argos' adventures in 'Diplomacy'.

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Thanks as usual. All my other crappier fics also have more views. I guess this one is just not the type of thing people usually try out.

Next chapter should have a bit more plot, now that Fractal is more or less used to the world and heading into civilization.

At least he won't have to deal with the rest of Argos's original party :yay:

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Aww what, you don't think he could handle a little bit of Brondan McHavok and Caracarn-Al-Hashim?

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